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The finally finished piece for Marmelmm. :D His character Tali and my two girls engaging in some healthy fun and games at the beach. ;)
Tali belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/marmelmm/
Aisha, Mei and art belongs to me. :D
Tali belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/marmelmm/
Aisha, Mei and art belongs to me. :D
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 764 x 1085px
File Size 865.8 kB
Strange, this pic got girls, it got bikinis, it got water, I just don't know why I took so much time until I finally write my comment on this..strange me... Well, better late then never, right?^^
Soo, let's start with the characters one by one, from foreground to background, shall we?
If I remember right it's already been about one month ago since I commented a "real" pic of Mei (with "real" I mean one where a detailed comment actually takes some of my time, my comment on that chibi pic was not that detailed). I just hope she's not getting too little attention. Ya know we love you too, Mei. *hugs*
But well, I shall get started now:
Mei's face is just great and I looove her smile. It's very nice to see this happiness and fun along with that cute blushing. I'd love if girls would look at me with such a nice smile. :D
Her chest and belly look sexy as always, I think swimsuits really look good on her. Not that I'd mind to see more skin like in a bikini, uncovered skin's lovely <3, but still I think it looks great this way. It looks great how you drew her curves in the breast- and hip area, just very adorable. The only thing I'd liked even more would be if the shape of her belly button would be visible through the cloth, but this does not disturb any of the overall impression, looks great the way it is. Her hip and legs also look great, very sexy work again and I'm happy that I have a legitimate subterfuge to comment on this again without sounding like a perv in any way. So, really beautiful here. *smiles*^^
Aside from her single body parts her overall pose is also very nice. I like the looks of her arms behind her back. For one thing it allows, well, the full visibility of her body's front, would be a waste to cover it^^, and another thing is that, in my opinion, this pose looks even cuter than she already looks through her expression. More general comments on the clothings, colors and effects later on.
Soo, Tali, eh? Another new character for me to comment on, marmelmm surely has a nice taste regarding girls, too.^^
She also has a nice expression and smile here and her hair surely looks beautiful. Like it seems to be usual on characters you draw (don't get this wrong, this is meant in a totally good and positive way!) her chest and belly look very sexy, too. I'm used by now that you pay much detail drawing collar bones, which is one thing I love about your style, and I think it also looks very nice here how you drew the visible shape of her chest's bones/ribs. I cannot rate anatomical correctness here, I don't even know enough about my own, male, anatomy and by far not enough about the female one, but the shading and effects really look great here. There are two things to say about her hips and thighs: 1. They are really sexy and 2. I love how they look while having her in the walking/running motion. Again I cannot rate the correctness of anatomy, but the "move" in the looks is just great here. The same goes for her limbs and the whole pose, it's done very nice, looking sexy and fitting great to her movements in my opinion. Her bikini is also very sexy, I love the pattern and it's "fluffiness". Like said previously, more on their clothes later.
Aww, poor Aisha as a victim of such a cruel robbery. :D
Seriously:
Her whole expression, including her ears, looks so damn cute. Her blushing, her opened mouth and the general "helpless" look, which I'm not used to see on her, looks really cute and is well done.
Here we have the third chest- and belly area in this pic that looks sexy.^^ Having her cover her breasts with her arms is very cute and the shape of her breasts, which is quite highlighted by her covering, looks very sexy and attractive. No longer comment on her belly, besides that it's sexy and I love seeing cute belly buttons. :D
Her legs are sexy as always and I like the pose of her legs, too. It somehow strengthens her overall helpless look and fits very well. Although I think it is damn wrong to think of her as helpless at any point.^^
So, all of her pose looks great, all those combined things: expression, ears, tail and the pose of her legs, it just creates a wonderful overall composition.
Aw, and I love this kind of bikini, the natural look is just so sexy and I already like those "leaf bikini" on that Love Hina girl, and even more o her.
..well, now I finally mentioned it and this marks the next section in here, the clothing:
I love the swimsuit and bikinis in this pic for both reasons:
1. The kinda obvious sexiness on all of the characters, everyone just looks great in their clothes.
2. The funny and interesting cosplay effects, it's nice to see some furry somehow combined with anime here, we already talked about this quite some time ago, and I still like the idea and looks of it.
Yeah, sadly I don't have any new comment on your shadings and coloration, so you'll have to stick with the usual one:
You did a great job on all of this. The colors look very nice, giving the pic a very fun and delightful atmosphere while fitting wonderful to each other an the characters. I already mentioned some of the details and effects before, and once again I have to say you did very well with this drawing. All little details, shadows and additions look just great.
You also did a good job at the background and, well, everything that's not characters, too. The water looks nice with its ripples and the beach also looks nice. I just think it's a bit too, mhh, "hilly". Having those dunes start so early in the front of the beach already looks a bit like being in a desert's oasis than on a normal beach, but well, I wouldn't consider this "bad", just looked a bit strange to me now when looking close. Normally I would not pay enough attention as I'd just be enjoying the look of the characters here, but as I want my comments to be at least a bit detailed I gotta concentrate on the surroundings from time to time, too.^^
Besides that it looks good, the beach is a bit empty, but well, more people would just distract from the main characters here and might cause them too much trouble stealing bikini parts. :D
So, I'm very thankful to have a bikini pic here, it looks really great, and I also want to thank
marmelmm for this commission so we all got to see and share this.
Oh, and as a comment to that fish and your comment on it:
Well, the fish is in a LUCKS SITUATION, but I'd never consider it as "lucky". I mean, come on, being in between those wonder- and beautiful girls and not being able to hug any of them due to the lack of arms? I think that's just a very cruel thing. *laughs*
Yeah, well, thanks again for this, another wonderful pic.
Greetings,
RealZero
Soo, let's start with the characters one by one, from foreground to background, shall we?
If I remember right it's already been about one month ago since I commented a "real" pic of Mei (with "real" I mean one where a detailed comment actually takes some of my time, my comment on that chibi pic was not that detailed). I just hope she's not getting too little attention. Ya know we love you too, Mei. *hugs*
But well, I shall get started now:
Mei's face is just great and I looove her smile. It's very nice to see this happiness and fun along with that cute blushing. I'd love if girls would look at me with such a nice smile. :D
Her chest and belly look sexy as always, I think swimsuits really look good on her. Not that I'd mind to see more skin like in a bikini, uncovered skin's lovely <3, but still I think it looks great this way. It looks great how you drew her curves in the breast- and hip area, just very adorable. The only thing I'd liked even more would be if the shape of her belly button would be visible through the cloth, but this does not disturb any of the overall impression, looks great the way it is. Her hip and legs also look great, very sexy work again and I'm happy that I have a legitimate subterfuge to comment on this again without sounding like a perv in any way. So, really beautiful here. *smiles*^^
Aside from her single body parts her overall pose is also very nice. I like the looks of her arms behind her back. For one thing it allows, well, the full visibility of her body's front, would be a waste to cover it^^, and another thing is that, in my opinion, this pose looks even cuter than she already looks through her expression. More general comments on the clothings, colors and effects later on.
Soo, Tali, eh? Another new character for me to comment on, marmelmm surely has a nice taste regarding girls, too.^^
She also has a nice expression and smile here and her hair surely looks beautiful. Like it seems to be usual on characters you draw (don't get this wrong, this is meant in a totally good and positive way!) her chest and belly look very sexy, too. I'm used by now that you pay much detail drawing collar bones, which is one thing I love about your style, and I think it also looks very nice here how you drew the visible shape of her chest's bones/ribs. I cannot rate anatomical correctness here, I don't even know enough about my own, male, anatomy and by far not enough about the female one, but the shading and effects really look great here. There are two things to say about her hips and thighs: 1. They are really sexy and 2. I love how they look while having her in the walking/running motion. Again I cannot rate the correctness of anatomy, but the "move" in the looks is just great here. The same goes for her limbs and the whole pose, it's done very nice, looking sexy and fitting great to her movements in my opinion. Her bikini is also very sexy, I love the pattern and it's "fluffiness". Like said previously, more on their clothes later.
Aww, poor Aisha as a victim of such a cruel robbery. :D
Seriously:
Her whole expression, including her ears, looks so damn cute. Her blushing, her opened mouth and the general "helpless" look, which I'm not used to see on her, looks really cute and is well done.
Here we have the third chest- and belly area in this pic that looks sexy.^^ Having her cover her breasts with her arms is very cute and the shape of her breasts, which is quite highlighted by her covering, looks very sexy and attractive. No longer comment on her belly, besides that it's sexy and I love seeing cute belly buttons. :D
Her legs are sexy as always and I like the pose of her legs, too. It somehow strengthens her overall helpless look and fits very well. Although I think it is damn wrong to think of her as helpless at any point.^^
So, all of her pose looks great, all those combined things: expression, ears, tail and the pose of her legs, it just creates a wonderful overall composition.
Aw, and I love this kind of bikini, the natural look is just so sexy and I already like those "leaf bikini" on that Love Hina girl, and even more o her.
..well, now I finally mentioned it and this marks the next section in here, the clothing:
I love the swimsuit and bikinis in this pic for both reasons:
1. The kinda obvious sexiness on all of the characters, everyone just looks great in their clothes.
2. The funny and interesting cosplay effects, it's nice to see some furry somehow combined with anime here, we already talked about this quite some time ago, and I still like the idea and looks of it.
Yeah, sadly I don't have any new comment on your shadings and coloration, so you'll have to stick with the usual one:
You did a great job on all of this. The colors look very nice, giving the pic a very fun and delightful atmosphere while fitting wonderful to each other an the characters. I already mentioned some of the details and effects before, and once again I have to say you did very well with this drawing. All little details, shadows and additions look just great.
You also did a good job at the background and, well, everything that's not characters, too. The water looks nice with its ripples and the beach also looks nice. I just think it's a bit too, mhh, "hilly". Having those dunes start so early in the front of the beach already looks a bit like being in a desert's oasis than on a normal beach, but well, I wouldn't consider this "bad", just looked a bit strange to me now when looking close. Normally I would not pay enough attention as I'd just be enjoying the look of the characters here, but as I want my comments to be at least a bit detailed I gotta concentrate on the surroundings from time to time, too.^^
Besides that it looks good, the beach is a bit empty, but well, more people would just distract from the main characters here and might cause them too much trouble stealing bikini parts. :D
So, I'm very thankful to have a bikini pic here, it looks really great, and I also want to thank
marmelmm for this commission so we all got to see and share this.Oh, and as a comment to that fish and your comment on it:
Well, the fish is in a LUCKS SITUATION, but I'd never consider it as "lucky". I mean, come on, being in between those wonder- and beautiful girls and not being able to hug any of them due to the lack of arms? I think that's just a very cruel thing. *laughs*
Yeah, well, thanks again for this, another wonderful pic.
Greetings,
RealZero
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