Such an adorable puppy pile :'3 I like the style, I'll be looking forward to more pages ^^

That is utterly adorable! I'm going to love this, I know.

A critique, if I may: it's not clear to me what's going on in some respects here. Sleeping puppy is suddenly attentive, that's clear; then someone's lifting some fabric where the puppies previously seemed to be in the open; then they're emerging from some sort of round-topped structure; then puppy is pawing at the curtains. I'm... a bit lost?

Thank you for your critique, I always welcome it! This medium (comic/graphic novel/visual storytelling) is completely new territory for me!
You are right in your interpretations except the last panel he's pawing at the backs of cloaks. I will work on making them look more cloaky!

You're welcome! *swishy tail*

And the addition of the speech-bubble with the plural "hunters" helps predispose the reader to see the cloaks as cloaky.

Nice job

"Instant dogs". Today I learned puppies are like ramen noodles.

Pour some water on them and *poof*! Dogs! :)

Yay, Tibetan mastiffs!

PUPPY PILE! So snuggly cute!!! hee hee hee

PUPPY PILE! This is gonna be an awesome comic!!!!