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Kawheek has an adventure in the forest!
Done by Theo Winters
Done by Theo Winters
Category Story / Transformation
Species Bear (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 7.6 kB
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Cool little one-shot tf! I like when an author does not tell the reader what creature the character is becoming until the transformation ends, especially if the description is vivid enough to allow the reader to guess the victim's fate.
Only note I would make is the word "pounce" is used where "pouch" seems more appropriate.
Only note I would make is the word "pounce" is used where "pouch" seems more appropriate.
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