
Moon Doesn't Care About Size I. Prologue
I am Andrew Prokesh, 36 year old scientist who made some breaktroughs in teleportation technology. Since I invented this technology, I wanted to be the first human to be teleported. It worked, I got teleported, but I ended up in a land full of ponies, and a size of 1 milimeter! Will you survive is this world, where everybody is trying to step on you?
Please, critize as much as you want. I need to know where do I make mistakes or where can I make the story better.
As I look at this, it's really bad. Well, what would you want after 4 years of not writing?
Also, yes, I have permission from AlloyRabbit to use his awesome picture
Please, critize as much as you want. I need to know where do I make mistakes or where can I make the story better.
As I look at this, it's really bad. Well, what would you want after 4 years of not writing?
Also, yes, I have permission from AlloyRabbit to use his awesome picture
Category Story / My Little Pony / Brony
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 89px
File Size 4.3 kB
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