wow! I like that shapes! : D

Thanks! I normally work by drawing an outline and filling it in, but for this guy I started with a solid black body and juat layered stuff on top. Worked wonders!

hah, thats nice! it came out great :D

dawww look at that tail poof! >3<
and the gun smoke looks awesome!

Gun smooooke! I really love drawing guns and stuff C: this guy is my prime sona as well as the main character for moon ( he'll be a Hume in Moon though )!

Ooooh that's awesome! Hope that means we get to see more of this guy CB
I really wanna know more about moon now :3

Moon is about a major arms tech company who had a project to essentially rectify the earth after it the apocalypse happened. The device was supposed to be launched from the moon, a major source of magic.

The first team who went to the moon mysteriously lost contact with the tech comoany, and they've sent numerous teams to get it back, but all have failed.

5 years into the future, the operator known as Sūno Winter is hired by the same arms tech company to go to the moon and figure things out. He accepts the job and travels to the moon, quickly making sense of the situation.

From then on in winter must fight for his life against the inhabitants of the moon, the company who sent him, and his own loyalties about the initial project. Low on ammo, stuck in the middle of the unknown, only one question can be asked about the situation:

What asked re you more afraid of? What lurks in the shadows, or what lurks in the light?

Ooh wow! That sounds really kool! Sounds a little psychological and I love that :3
Is it something your making? And will it be a book/graphic Novel? And where can I find out even more?! It's really got me :3

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also since you asked for pointers
try to avoid using pure blacks for colour, use an off-tone one or a gradient!
also the smoke could use a tinge of white c:

Sounds good, thank you! :3

the movement in this is awesome. i really like the energy in the pose. i would say you could portray stronger shadows, such as a stark shadow underneath the character. look at how light reacts to things indoors, it can be very contrasted, much more than you may realize. also, the forearm holding the gun could be a little longer, i guess.

ahhh i hope i'm not coming off harsh or anything it's really wonderful that you're moving outside of lineart and i'm super flattered you wanted my critique ; v ;

Everything and anything that people can say to help me get better as widely accepted! Thank you so much for your critique critique! Getting better is the name of my game, and you, Sqrew and lethal are the people I look up to for artsing! :3

Again thank you so much!