aww thats pretty sweet , lovely dreamy background

Can I give some criticism on this lovely pice?

yes

Alright, sorry this took so long I had to re-write the whole thing x-x

First, the shading/lighting. while you did a good job with the effect of it, Sonic and Akai could use some more lighting and shadding. Such as where Akai is laying on Sonic and Sonic.

Second, the anatomy. You have gotten ALOT better with legs! The knees look like they are where they should be, Sonic's look almost perfect! Same with Akai but the very skinny part at the end of her leg should me cut in half and thickened a bit. And where is her other leg? Another thing is Akai's right butt cheek, it looks like her but is facing twords me instead of turned away from me. Make it less round and big when drawing from this angle. And Sonic's right hand, it looks like his glove is all stuck together.

Lastly, the background. The stars are very pretty it could use more, such as the bottom left and right corners.

And thats it. Very lovely piece just needs some tiny improvement here and there

I kind of get a Sailor Moon vibe here but this is one of the most beautifully romantic scenes you've done since the field of butterflies pic you did. They look so cute like this, very nice work. ^^

Akia this is so beautiful I love what you did with the glow of the moon and the coloring of akai and sonic very amazing job keep it up.

I know a good song for this pic . https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlxByc0-V40