sorry for being so late in the reading Sphinx... life has caught up to me with a vengence...

liked the story - just a pity that after the sacrifice all was lost in any case. I'm not thinking I'm liking this new character... but I also understand that social - I'm missing the word I want - the way one is raised - the social belief system taught from birth - could be at play here. (or maybe not)

*gives her a hug...

V.

Oh no, he's an evil big meany and your not meant to like him. Though he might have some interesting background. Haven't discovered him enough. No worries on being late, words don't have an expiration date. I can understand being behind though. I wish I could read everyone's stories that posts but I usually only have time for a few people. I'm glad you like it! Thank you!

Lovely story - sorry I've been so slow!! I can't wait to read more! ^_^

Thank you very much. It's starting to become a monthly thing isn't it?

I'm sooo behind in my submissions and my TPs as well!!! >_<

Strong. Action-packed. So short and so full of action and emotion. The imagery is very powerful, swrods and sword-fighting and the cruel execution in the end. Great little piece, I enjoyed reading this.