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Ok... a W.I.P but... I just want some feedback so PLEASE COMMENT!!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 870 x 758px
File Size 813 kB
SilentR
YEESSS!!!!!! CATERPIE & PICHU!!!! *melts*
Critique:
I love how Caterpie's positioned on a leaf, but, it's sorta difficult to tell what that leaf is coming from. I think it's budding off the tree, but, then I wonder where does the tree end. Maybe in color it would be obvious, even at second glance, I'll now thinking that road becomes the entire foreground for the bottom of the picture.
Pichu's expression is beautiful, wouldn't change a thing!! Is Pichu skipping though? I could see it as walking, but maybe it's the how the head's turned, and the positions of the hands doing it. Either way, this is a great picture and I totally can't wait to see it finished ^___^.
Critique:
I love how Caterpie's positioned on a leaf, but, it's sorta difficult to tell what that leaf is coming from. I think it's budding off the tree, but, then I wonder where does the tree end. Maybe in color it would be obvious, even at second glance, I'll now thinking that road becomes the entire foreground for the bottom of the picture.
Pichu's expression is beautiful, wouldn't change a thing!! Is Pichu skipping though? I could see it as walking, but maybe it's the how the head's turned, and the positions of the hands doing it. Either way, this is a great picture and I totally can't wait to see it finished ^___^.
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