I would have commented on this sooner but I didn't even know it had been posted! I like it, the interactions between shade and marsh are pretty much spot on. It was interesting to see them all in an actual story since I don't have any for any of my characters, the personalities are a bit different from what's in my head but I didn't really put enough in the descriptions to be considered a good bio for a story so you couldn't really have known :P Thanks again!

You might have already done it but you also might want to link this on the shouts thing on the page so they give you credit for doing it and post to their gallery!

I actually have a separate file for all three of the character's bios so you can further flesh them out in your own view. Would you like that text file sent to you?