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I know I already have a lot of unfinished stories, but I decided to give you another one as a present. This one is about Louis from "The Princess and the Frog", and it's my close friend 
Ian-exe that made this image that I use for the icon.
Link to full image: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14729780/
Link to part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15869828/
Link to part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16138065/
Link to part 4: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16542596/
Link to part 5: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16578928/
Louis and the other characters belongs to Disney.
(This story starts right after the group had been visiting Mama Odie.)
Our heroes were on their way to Mama Odie. Tiana and Naveen had heard from the fat, trumpet playing alligator named Louis that she was the one that could help them become humans again. He was also the only one who knew where she lived. At first he didn’t want to help them get there because it was scary, but after Naveen said too him that if he got transformed into a human as well he decided to lead them to her.
Louis felt a bit stupid not figuring out this himself. He loved playing jazz and wanted to be able to play it for the humans. They had always been scared for him (being that he was an alligator.), and never really letting him show them what he could do. He knew that if he only was human they would love him. He also knew that Mama Odie had all kind of magical abilities. So he couldn’t get why he hadn’t visited her himself before? “Anyway” he thought, “Now it’s my time. I’m going to become a human and fulfil my dream.”
When they reached Mama Odie´s home (that was the wreck of a boat in a tree.) Mama Odie told Tiana and Naveen how they must “dig a little deeper” and look for “what they need instead of what they want.” She also sang it in a big song number with gospel singing birds. After that it was Louis turn to talk to Mama and tell her what he needed help with. He told her he to needed to be human so he could “play with the big boys”. But all Mama Odie said was that he to needed to “dig a little deeper” and he would find everything he needs. He wanted to ask her some more but he saw that she had sat down in her chair and fallen asleep.
Louis didn’t really get what she had said to him, and thought about something different. During the time he had spent here at Mama Odie´s home he had seen that she has a big stick that worked like a magic wand. In the musical number he saw her use it to turn her pet snake Juju into a dog, pig, cow and goat. He had also seen that she had a bathtub that was filled with gumbo. He had seen that it to had magical powers.
“Are you coming with us Louis?” Tiana and Naveen asked Louis. “We need to get back to New Orleans before midnight if we are going to break the curse.” “Yes I’m coming soon.” Louis replayed. “I just need to do a quick thing. You can go first. I reach up with you quickly.” “Okay.” The frogs said and they leaved the house.
“At least one of those things should be nice shortcut for me to reach my goal of becoming a human.” Louis though for himself. “All I need to do is to be quick and stealthy while she’s asleep.” Louis thought looking at Mama Odie sleeping in her chair.
Seeing what magical powers the stick had Louis decided that it would do. "I just hope Mama Odie doesn't get mad on me for this." Louis thought to himself. "I mean I'm not going to steal it, just barrow it for a short time. But if I want to take it without Mama Odie noticing it I have to be quick and stealthy”. But being an almost obese alligator made it pretty hard for Louis to be stealthy. For every step he took the floor would made cracking sounds, and he could also feel the whole boat house tilting a little because of his movements. But still he could see how Mama Odie just sat there snoring. “Must be a really hard sleeper.” Louis thought.
After many careful but noisy steps Louis was finally in reach for the stick. He saw how Mama Odie was holding it in a tight grip while sleeping. He leaned forward trying to reach it. But just as he was close enough to grab it, Mama Odie pulled it away from his paws.
Even though she was blind and had glasses on, Louis knew that she was now awake and staring at him.
Louis, (who had thought this was such a good idea before) now felt like he had made the biggest mistake of his life. How could he have thought this was a smart idea from the start? Try to steal something from someone that he had clearly seen had the ability to control magic didn’t sound like such a great plan anymore.
He was sweating and shivering by fear of what was going to happen to him now. Louis didn't do anything else but breathing heavily, Hoping that by standing still Mama Odie wouldn’t be able to see where he was standing. But his hope was quickly crushed.
“So you tried to steal from me?” Mama Odie said. “And now you think that by just standing still I wouldn’t know you where still standing there. I can clearly hear that you’re still here.” Louis made a nervous gulp in respond.
“I can hear you’re a big fellow too,” Mama Odie continued. “By how big sounds you’re breathing makes, and by how your fat belly touches the ground every time you breathe out.” Louis stop breathing and looked down too see how close to the floor his stomach really was. He took and pulled it in a bit just too try to prove her wrong. (Even thought Mama Odie wouldn’t be able to see any difference.)
“It’s too late to be silent now Mr. gator, I know where you stand and I will teach you lesson too make sure that you and you’re fat greedy fingers never even thinks about stealing again!” Mama Odie yelled and throw a magical spell right against Louis.
All he could now was to hope that for a miracle.
The spell hits him and a big smoke cloud surrounds him.
When the smoke disappears around Louis he couldn’t believe what he saw. He had still the same body. He didn’t know if something went wrong with Mama Odie spell, or what it was. He just stood still and silent and looked at Mama Odie. She was acting a bit confused.
“What happened? Did I hit you?” Mama Odie asked out to the silence. Louis thought of this as his way to escape from her, and started to act like if he had been hit.
“Oh, ooooooooh, ooooooooooooooooh!” Louis cried out in pain and rolled on the ground, holding his stomach like if he had been shot there.
If Mama Odie could have seen now she would have died of laugh of Louise’s bad overacting. He made so much effort in looking like he was hurt (forgetting that the woman he was doing it for was blind) that his screaming didn’t sound so serious all the times.
As he was faking his injuries Louis started to back toward the exit of the boat. Finally he reached to a part of the boat where the hull was missing. “The swamp is just down there.” Louis thought. “All I need to do now is to make a nice final, and then I can escape her.”
Louis made sure to really act like this was the end for him, and finished by falling of the boat with a scream of death.
With a big splash everything went silent afterwards. Underwater Louis decided that the best thing to do now was swim back to the frog, and act like nothing happened when he was left with Mama Odie. He also decided to stay underwater while swimming for as long as he could hold his breath, just to stay hidden while near the boathouse. “Even though she can’t see I don’t want to take any more risks with her.” Louis thought and started swimming away.
From her chair that she had been sitting the whole time Mama Odie could hear the big alligator swim away. When she couldn’t hear him anymore, she let out a big laughter for herself. “Ha, ha, ha. Oh my. I haven’t heard such bad acting in all my life! He really thought that with over 100 years of magic casting that I would miss such a big target. What he don’t know is that the spell I cast on him doesn’t work right away. But soon he will start to gain a pound.
Every.
Five.
Minutes."
Ian-exe that made this image that I use for the icon.Link to full image: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14729780/
Link to part 2: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15869828/
Link to part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16138065/
Link to part 4: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16542596/
Link to part 5: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16578928/
Louis and the other characters belongs to Disney.
(This story starts right after the group had been visiting Mama Odie.)
Our heroes were on their way to Mama Odie. Tiana and Naveen had heard from the fat, trumpet playing alligator named Louis that she was the one that could help them become humans again. He was also the only one who knew where she lived. At first he didn’t want to help them get there because it was scary, but after Naveen said too him that if he got transformed into a human as well he decided to lead them to her.
Louis felt a bit stupid not figuring out this himself. He loved playing jazz and wanted to be able to play it for the humans. They had always been scared for him (being that he was an alligator.), and never really letting him show them what he could do. He knew that if he only was human they would love him. He also knew that Mama Odie had all kind of magical abilities. So he couldn’t get why he hadn’t visited her himself before? “Anyway” he thought, “Now it’s my time. I’m going to become a human and fulfil my dream.”
When they reached Mama Odie´s home (that was the wreck of a boat in a tree.) Mama Odie told Tiana and Naveen how they must “dig a little deeper” and look for “what they need instead of what they want.” She also sang it in a big song number with gospel singing birds. After that it was Louis turn to talk to Mama and tell her what he needed help with. He told her he to needed to be human so he could “play with the big boys”. But all Mama Odie said was that he to needed to “dig a little deeper” and he would find everything he needs. He wanted to ask her some more but he saw that she had sat down in her chair and fallen asleep.
Louis didn’t really get what she had said to him, and thought about something different. During the time he had spent here at Mama Odie´s home he had seen that she has a big stick that worked like a magic wand. In the musical number he saw her use it to turn her pet snake Juju into a dog, pig, cow and goat. He had also seen that she had a bathtub that was filled with gumbo. He had seen that it to had magical powers.
“Are you coming with us Louis?” Tiana and Naveen asked Louis. “We need to get back to New Orleans before midnight if we are going to break the curse.” “Yes I’m coming soon.” Louis replayed. “I just need to do a quick thing. You can go first. I reach up with you quickly.” “Okay.” The frogs said and they leaved the house.
“At least one of those things should be nice shortcut for me to reach my goal of becoming a human.” Louis though for himself. “All I need to do is to be quick and stealthy while she’s asleep.” Louis thought looking at Mama Odie sleeping in her chair.
Seeing what magical powers the stick had Louis decided that it would do. "I just hope Mama Odie doesn't get mad on me for this." Louis thought to himself. "I mean I'm not going to steal it, just barrow it for a short time. But if I want to take it without Mama Odie noticing it I have to be quick and stealthy”. But being an almost obese alligator made it pretty hard for Louis to be stealthy. For every step he took the floor would made cracking sounds, and he could also feel the whole boat house tilting a little because of his movements. But still he could see how Mama Odie just sat there snoring. “Must be a really hard sleeper.” Louis thought.
After many careful but noisy steps Louis was finally in reach for the stick. He saw how Mama Odie was holding it in a tight grip while sleeping. He leaned forward trying to reach it. But just as he was close enough to grab it, Mama Odie pulled it away from his paws.
Even though she was blind and had glasses on, Louis knew that she was now awake and staring at him.
Louis, (who had thought this was such a good idea before) now felt like he had made the biggest mistake of his life. How could he have thought this was a smart idea from the start? Try to steal something from someone that he had clearly seen had the ability to control magic didn’t sound like such a great plan anymore.
He was sweating and shivering by fear of what was going to happen to him now. Louis didn't do anything else but breathing heavily, Hoping that by standing still Mama Odie wouldn’t be able to see where he was standing. But his hope was quickly crushed.
“So you tried to steal from me?” Mama Odie said. “And now you think that by just standing still I wouldn’t know you where still standing there. I can clearly hear that you’re still here.” Louis made a nervous gulp in respond.
“I can hear you’re a big fellow too,” Mama Odie continued. “By how big sounds you’re breathing makes, and by how your fat belly touches the ground every time you breathe out.” Louis stop breathing and looked down too see how close to the floor his stomach really was. He took and pulled it in a bit just too try to prove her wrong. (Even thought Mama Odie wouldn’t be able to see any difference.)
“It’s too late to be silent now Mr. gator, I know where you stand and I will teach you lesson too make sure that you and you’re fat greedy fingers never even thinks about stealing again!” Mama Odie yelled and throw a magical spell right against Louis.
All he could now was to hope that for a miracle.
The spell hits him and a big smoke cloud surrounds him.
When the smoke disappears around Louis he couldn’t believe what he saw. He had still the same body. He didn’t know if something went wrong with Mama Odie spell, or what it was. He just stood still and silent and looked at Mama Odie. She was acting a bit confused.
“What happened? Did I hit you?” Mama Odie asked out to the silence. Louis thought of this as his way to escape from her, and started to act like if he had been hit.
“Oh, ooooooooh, ooooooooooooooooh!” Louis cried out in pain and rolled on the ground, holding his stomach like if he had been shot there.
If Mama Odie could have seen now she would have died of laugh of Louise’s bad overacting. He made so much effort in looking like he was hurt (forgetting that the woman he was doing it for was blind) that his screaming didn’t sound so serious all the times.
As he was faking his injuries Louis started to back toward the exit of the boat. Finally he reached to a part of the boat where the hull was missing. “The swamp is just down there.” Louis thought. “All I need to do now is to make a nice final, and then I can escape her.”
Louis made sure to really act like this was the end for him, and finished by falling of the boat with a scream of death.
With a big splash everything went silent afterwards. Underwater Louis decided that the best thing to do now was swim back to the frog, and act like nothing happened when he was left with Mama Odie. He also decided to stay underwater while swimming for as long as he could hold his breath, just to stay hidden while near the boathouse. “Even though she can’t see I don’t want to take any more risks with her.” Louis thought and started swimming away.
From her chair that she had been sitting the whole time Mama Odie could hear the big alligator swim away. When she couldn’t hear him anymore, she let out a big laughter for herself. “Ha, ha, ha. Oh my. I haven’t heard such bad acting in all my life! He really thought that with over 100 years of magic casting that I would miss such a big target. What he don’t know is that the spell I cast on him doesn’t work right away. But soon he will start to gain a pound.
Every.
Five.
Minutes."
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 99 x 120px
File Size 32.5 kB
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