I feel this in an aggressive mid-tempo rock song, and in my head the verses have a great melody to them. ;)

I like the wordage sir Wolf!

A beautiful piece of work, although there was some rhymes and rhythms that seemed a tad bit off "soul/old" (probably just me pronouncing the d at old). Otherwise solid, and I adore the message.

I need say nothig that has not yet been said... more people should have this introspective.

*hugs...

V.

I would like to say something here but once again I am completely and utterly unable to come up with a good comment. So I'll stick to saying that I liked it.

"I’d like to build a petting zoo For bestiality
I have a scheme, a dream harem A sex menagerie
I'd like to shag a cormorant Go dogging with the hounds
Perhaps dry-hump a camel on the desert's sandy mounds
I’d pork a pig and mount a horse Get horny with a cow
I’d titillate an ocelot if only I knew how
I want to sleep with dormice
Find out if a dingo goes
And if I met a sperm whale You could all shout "There she blows!"
I’d lay the hens and goose the geese And gobble turkeys too
I want to bang a siamang And jump a kangaroo
I’d like to bone hyenas Catching crabs could be a laugh
I’d finger fish and pull a mussel Necking a giraffe
I’d like to bum a bumblebee I’ve known a cockatoo
So bring your K-Y Jellyfish And join the petting zoo!
But love a dove or fuck a duck You’ll be misunderstood
My zo-o-philic longings never came to any good -
My planning application Was abruptly thrown away
I hate those interfering prudes the RSPCA "


lyric by miss prisam of (doghorse)

Wow, so cool! I don't suppose these were written to a particular melody?

Very interesting. I would say this is punk, although there are too many words and lack of the f-word. Anyway, enjoyed reading this, good work, I think this would work really well, if you found a suitable melody to accompany it.