Oooh, I really dig where it gets all wide at 0:34 here. Overlays really well with the sorta cellphone-ring-y synth that stays in for more or less the whole track. I must complain the synth that shows up at around 1:10 is a little plain and high in the mix. But as a doodle it's all pretty promising-sounding.

Thanks for the critique! I've honestly been wanting some words on my pieces for such a long time, haha. Looking back, I definately feel the same way about the synth around 1:10, I could've played around and given that melody something that belonged within the confines of the piece. I feel like I've expanded a bit since then and improved my work, but it's always good to know how I can refine my older pieces ^^> Thanks~!

One of the best things for a piece is time in a drawer before re-listening/re-inspecting, etc. Cheers.