
(Warning: this ended up being a lot longer than I thought it would.)
Picking up from last time, Burst is finally getting his shot at a teammate of his tormentor. Unfortunately, this isn't exactly the cakewalk that he had been expecting. (Gee that's a stupid metaphor, isn't it? I mean who walks on cake anyway...)
The formatting is kinda clunky, some of the dialogue is a bit unpolished and I probably missed an error or two here or there, but dammit I FINISHED THIS FINALLY. I hope. Oh man, I am so gonna oversleep and be late for work now...
Mia Wattson =
natsuki_raichu
Casey Marine =
theaubri
Burst, Rukey, Mighty-anne, Sammy =
crossdog367
Sorbet =
licorice
Picking up from last time, Burst is finally getting his shot at a teammate of his tormentor. Unfortunately, this isn't exactly the cakewalk that he had been expecting. (Gee that's a stupid metaphor, isn't it? I mean who walks on cake anyway...)
The formatting is kinda clunky, some of the dialogue is a bit unpolished and I probably missed an error or two here or there, but dammit I FINISHED THIS FINALLY. I hope. Oh man, I am so gonna oversleep and be late for work now...
Mia Wattson =

Casey Marine =

Burst, Rukey, Mighty-anne, Sammy =

Sorbet =

Category Story / Pokemon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 21.3 kB
Probably a little better than getting smashed across the arena floor, but yeah. He's gonna be feeling this one for a couple days.
Poor Rukey got so nervous watching the beginning of the match that he had to go do his business all of a sudden, and with with the sidelines being so crowded he just couldn't quite remember where the exits were and got all turned around. Probably for the best he didn't catch the ending to this one though...
Poor Rukey got so nervous watching the beginning of the match that he had to go do his business all of a sudden, and with with the sidelines being so crowded he just couldn't quite remember where the exits were and got all turned around. Probably for the best he didn't catch the ending to this one though...
Love this ^^ You really captured the action here!
Deanna: *Cheering* That cat'll be feeling that ice punch for a LONG time! *punches the air*
Treighlana: I feel kinda sorry for him. Ah well, there goes five bucks -.-
Kelis: Okay, pay up. Li'll miss Psychic! ; I had it on the bunny from the begginning!
Deanna: *Cheering* That cat'll be feeling that ice punch for a LONG time! *punches the air*
Treighlana: I feel kinda sorry for him. Ah well, there goes five bucks -.-
Kelis: Okay, pay up. Li'll miss Psychic! ; I had it on the bunny from the begginning!
Thank
natsuki_raichu, she started the idea in a few RP sessions and it struck me as being a fun alternative to relying on lots of crowd chatter to add to the scene.

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