Sounds like an interesting start anyways. Maybe a bit as to what the alien that crawled down his throat is/does, where it came from, why is it here. Seemed to bond with the human and absorb his thoughts/personality.... perhaps a conversion fleet of some kind (change the populace, but don't kill them)? Paul and Aaron are just friends, how long, anything more? So Aaron 'hatched' from his human body? Through the belly? What, like a chestburster from Aliens?

Just throwing questions you may want to think about. I wanna see more/actual written work. :3

thanks for the questions.

the where and why of the alien creature will be reveled over the course of the story. I will say at this point is that the creature was created. For what purpose? I'll keep that to myself.

As for Aaron and Paul? they grew up in the same town but went to different schools. mainly saw each other during sports events between each other respective schools. still became friends, and are now roommates in collage.

And Aaron hatching from his human body? yes very Alien.

Oh, no need to say it all here, though I appreciate it. I'm more asking so YOU know what to put int he story. ^u^

well after a two year dry spell, I can't quite keep quite about what I intend for this story. There is also another reason I'm so gabby. I will be writing this story with dragon dictation. How cool is that!

Pretty cool~