Can I help to make it a bit more canon?
Trolls can only have black hair, but I like the style. You've picked a mutant blood color that also corresponds with being a sea dweller (violet-pink/fuschia mean fins) I suggest going with a color close to your birthday
first color is normal, second color is mutated
Aries = rust/bright red
Taurus = bronze/neon orange
Gemini = gold/lightning yellow
Cancer = lime/candy red
Leo = olive/yellow-green
Virgo = jade/neon green
Libra = teal/bright turquoise
Scorpio = cobalt/sky blue
Sagittarius = indigo/neon blue
Capricorn = purple/electric purple-blue
Aquarius = violet/neon purple-pink
Pisces = fuchsia/hot pink
also, Pisces are royalty
Each name has 6 letters for first name AND last name

here's an example for one of my fantrolls: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12882143/
note me/skype me and I can help make it super canon-worthy

also keep the chub 5ever, too cute (I love drawing Feferi and Aranea chubby <33)

I'm about to upload the trade thingie so I can also do a quick doodle thing :0