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So this is me trying to do something along the lines of Industrial or Dark-ish Trance. I have honestly never been to fond of the formulaic nature of those style but I decided to give it a shot and see how it goes. This is a WIP that still needs to be extended and maybe even have some parts added. Let's see how this goes
Category Music / Industrial
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File Size 5.37 MB
I was just randomly clicking music posts and came across yours. It impressed me enough to make a post.
I see this was an attempt at Industrial Rock class music. For that class of music, for me, it is the older Nine Inch Nails that is the standard I go by to recognize Industrial rock. It starts out with an industrial rock sound to me. Some soft vocals during the near solo drum part would fit in nice. But shortly after that. about the 1:25 mark you switch to what I would call Techno style a little too quickly in my opinion. To make the switch in style work, a longer more gradual shift between the two resulting in a longer song, could be what is needed. The last minute has a heart pounding melody and beat. That part alone could be expanded to a nice song on it's own. Finally, the abrupt ending was a mood killer, just as I was getting into it.
Final words. this looks to be a WIP, a compressed concept test for an Industrial/techno song. Going with that in mind, I think you have a potentially good piece here. Make it a 6 to 8 minute song or longer if you like and workout a better transition between the two styles, add some lyrics during the drum part but not have the vocals too dominating and you would have something I would like my Second Life DJ buddies to for play during their sets.
BTW, I've played this piece about 8 times by now. I like it.
I see this was an attempt at Industrial Rock class music. For that class of music, for me, it is the older Nine Inch Nails that is the standard I go by to recognize Industrial rock. It starts out with an industrial rock sound to me. Some soft vocals during the near solo drum part would fit in nice. But shortly after that. about the 1:25 mark you switch to what I would call Techno style a little too quickly in my opinion. To make the switch in style work, a longer more gradual shift between the two resulting in a longer song, could be what is needed. The last minute has a heart pounding melody and beat. That part alone could be expanded to a nice song on it's own. Finally, the abrupt ending was a mood killer, just as I was getting into it.
Final words. this looks to be a WIP, a compressed concept test for an Industrial/techno song. Going with that in mind, I think you have a potentially good piece here. Make it a 6 to 8 minute song or longer if you like and workout a better transition between the two styles, add some lyrics during the drum part but not have the vocals too dominating and you would have something I would like my Second Life DJ buddies to for play during their sets.
BTW, I've played this piece about 8 times by now. I like it.
Thanks a lot for the comment it means a lot. This is a wip and I might wanna make it longer haha. I asked for genre selections and someone said industrial and I have never done it before so I gave it a shot. This was just to test the waters in that genre to seee if I like it. That and I have no one to sing haha
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