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Hi MLP Fans.
This is a Story I have written today, for Boss Snikrots little Story Contest.
It is an alternate Version of the events, that was most important for Princess Luna, with a little Side Story about Boss Snikrots own Pony Character Rally Flag.
To say it before, English isn't my natural toungle. I had often to use the Google Translator for some Words or more complicated Lines. So it is more a direckt translation from german to english, than a real english gramatical correct Story.
And Yes, it isn't canon, but involves many Moments of the Canon Storyline.
I hope you like it and would be lucky over every comment you like to share with me.
P.s. I called it try, because it is my second try to write a Story in the Pony world and in english.
Edit: Sorry I had to overwork it a Little, to kill some errors and advance some Passages.
So this is the final Version 1.1 now.
This is a Story I have written today, for Boss Snikrots little Story Contest.
It is an alternate Version of the events, that was most important for Princess Luna, with a little Side Story about Boss Snikrots own Pony Character Rally Flag.
To say it before, English isn't my natural toungle. I had often to use the Google Translator for some Words or more complicated Lines. So it is more a direckt translation from german to english, than a real english gramatical correct Story.
And Yes, it isn't canon, but involves many Moments of the Canon Storyline.
I hope you like it and would be lucky over every comment you like to share with me.
P.s. I called it try, because it is my second try to write a Story in the Pony world and in english.
Edit: Sorry I had to overwork it a Little, to kill some errors and advance some Passages.
So this is the final Version 1.1 now.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 224.4 kB
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