WARNING: This is a fatfur story, mostly focusing on male weight gain (With some female fats too). There is also slob and immobility involved as well, but nothing too gross in this story. I won't lie though, it does get a bit dark towards the end, so don't go in expecting a satisfying conclusion.
I'm going to assume a lot of people seeing this story won't recognize me, but this tale was written as part of my interactive on Writing.com. Due to its nature as an interactive, it sometimes leads to "failure state" endings like this. I figured I might as well post this here as a sample because it's pretty self-contained, and I want to test out FA as another place to post my writing since I can't get a lot of feedback on Wiriting.com itself.
If you'd like to see the story in a more piece-by-piece way that's easier to digest, then I suggest you give my interactive a look! http://www.writing.com/main/interac.....ncer/map/15433 I'll also be adding this bad ending to there soon and hopefully continuing the story further down the "good ending" path.
Also I'd like to thank
metroidbob for their feedback and help for this, and generally being an awesome and inspiring friend. If you like my writing and especially male anthro weight gain, you should definitely check them out because they are waaaaaaaaay better at this than me.
I'd also like to thank
richard_faelen for their feedback as well! And my girlfriend for inspiring this whole storyline in the first place.
Anyways, thanks for reading this, and hope you guys enjoy! And also pleeeeeeaaaaaase don't be afraid to comment, whether it's telling me what you liked, or it's critique, or questions. Thanks guys!
I'm going to assume a lot of people seeing this story won't recognize me, but this tale was written as part of my interactive on Writing.com. Due to its nature as an interactive, it sometimes leads to "failure state" endings like this. I figured I might as well post this here as a sample because it's pretty self-contained, and I want to test out FA as another place to post my writing since I can't get a lot of feedback on Wiriting.com itself.
If you'd like to see the story in a more piece-by-piece way that's easier to digest, then I suggest you give my interactive a look! http://www.writing.com/main/interac.....ncer/map/15433 I'll also be adding this bad ending to there soon and hopefully continuing the story further down the "good ending" path.
Also I'd like to thank
metroidbob for their feedback and help for this, and generally being an awesome and inspiring friend. If you like my writing and especially male anthro weight gain, you should definitely check them out because they are waaaaaaaaay better at this than me.I'd also like to thank
richard_faelen for their feedback as well! And my girlfriend for inspiring this whole storyline in the first place.Anyways, thanks for reading this, and hope you guys enjoy! And also pleeeeeeaaaaaase don't be afraid to comment, whether it's telling me what you liked, or it's critique, or questions. Thanks guys!
Category Story / Fat Furs
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Size 50 x 50px
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