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Chapter Five: Bunches of Brunch
A date? Maybe. No it's just getting food right? Stormy can't help but wonder, what is going through that young man's mind. Is this game or is it something more.
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Chapter Five: Bunches of Brunch
A date? Maybe. No it's just getting food right? Stormy can't help but wonder, what is going through that young man's mind. Is this game or is it something more.
If you perfer to read this on Inkbunny, the link is here.
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=769625
Stormy and Steven © To Me Y'all
Category Story / All
Species Horse
Size 111 x 120px
File Size 20.5 kB
I can see why, Stormy, you're freakin hot. :)
Not in the supermodel way, more like the most genuine sort of person you'll ever meet way. I love that Stormy has flaws, and not cliche or overly dramatized ones. She's got real life problems just like everyone else. I can't stand folks that throw tropes into their backgrounds just to seem like they're more edgy or whatnot. One of the finest compliments anyone can give a writer is 'your character feels real'. Everything else is immaterial.
It's why I dislike some book series, because I just can't feel what the author wants me to, and it's largely because I don't believe in their character.
I could tell you some stories, man...
Not in the supermodel way, more like the most genuine sort of person you'll ever meet way. I love that Stormy has flaws, and not cliche or overly dramatized ones. She's got real life problems just like everyone else. I can't stand folks that throw tropes into their backgrounds just to seem like they're more edgy or whatnot. One of the finest compliments anyone can give a writer is 'your character feels real'. Everything else is immaterial.
It's why I dislike some book series, because I just can't feel what the author wants me to, and it's largely because I don't believe in their character.
I could tell you some stories, man...
I'm glad I started reading it, and that's rare. Good writers in the fandom are hard to find. Most just think they're good though the truth is rather the opposite. I know I'm a hard reader to please, partly because I have the experience of the writer as well, and a little real world experience with publishing, but even so, everyone thinks they're a brilliant writer.
Regardless, good writing to me must must must have real characters, a believable story and world, and consequences. Everything has an effect, even if it's indirect.
So far you've got all the requirements. :)
Regardless, good writing to me must must must have real characters, a believable story and world, and consequences. Everything has an effect, even if it's indirect.
So far you've got all the requirements. :)
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