 
                
                    Finally I get around to doing this. I've been meaning to get this up for a few months now. This is the first of my original songs. I hope you'll give it a listen.
Lyrics:
I've got dust in my eye
From diving into nothing
and scratching at the core
you've been waiting here all night
I'm not gonna feel into this
so this isn't right
You've got a criminal mind
You break all the hearts you leave behind
Oh, no
I'm not alone
I've got tears in my eyes
from living in the past
and letting my head run
You say you've found another love
well, you're not gonna come back to me
'cause I'm not the one
You've got a criminal mind
You leave all the hearts you break behind
You make it look so easy
while I'm sinkin'
I'm the captain of my own ship
but, it's goin' down down down
Will you save me
from a lonesome ride?
This room is too big to fill
so, don't you hide
Oh, no
I'm not alone
I've got dust in my eye
From living in the past
letting my head run
You say you've found another love
You're not gonna come back to me
'cause I'm not the one
You've got a criminal mind
You hide from the ones you leave behind
You make it look so easy
While you're sinkin'
You're the captain of your own ship
And it's going down down down
Oh, I can save you
from a lonesome ride
these shoes are too big to fill
so, don't you cry
Oh, no
I'm not alone
            Lyrics:
I've got dust in my eye
From diving into nothing
and scratching at the core
you've been waiting here all night
I'm not gonna feel into this
so this isn't right
You've got a criminal mind
You break all the hearts you leave behind
Oh, no
I'm not alone
I've got tears in my eyes
from living in the past
and letting my head run
You say you've found another love
well, you're not gonna come back to me
'cause I'm not the one
You've got a criminal mind
You leave all the hearts you break behind
You make it look so easy
while I'm sinkin'
I'm the captain of my own ship
but, it's goin' down down down
Will you save me
from a lonesome ride?
This room is too big to fill
so, don't you hide
Oh, no
I'm not alone
I've got dust in my eye
From living in the past
letting my head run
You say you've found another love
You're not gonna come back to me
'cause I'm not the one
You've got a criminal mind
You hide from the ones you leave behind
You make it look so easy
While you're sinkin'
You're the captain of your own ship
And it's going down down down
Oh, I can save you
from a lonesome ride
these shoes are too big to fill
so, don't you cry
Oh, no
I'm not alone
Category Music / All
                    Species Unspecified / Any
                    Size 118 x 120px
                    File Size 5.31 MB
                
                    Well...this was an interesting thing to stumble into. Gotta say, I was both very surprised and pleased by the use of the kazoo. X3 Nice touch.
Lyrics are definitely your strong point, save for one instance I thought was kinda weak (and I'm not too keen on syllable stretching :< ), but it's very well written regardless And you have a great voice. :3 And the guitar compliments it well.
Your original works have promise and I totally would love to hear some more.
            Lyrics are definitely your strong point, save for one instance I thought was kinda weak (and I'm not too keen on syllable stretching :< ), but it's very well written regardless And you have a great voice. :3 And the guitar compliments it well.
Your original works have promise and I totally would love to hear some more.
 
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