Changeling
by peacemakerp66
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11 years ago
The end of the first week of my Pen and Paper Challenge.
Challenge Log
Stories Completed 7/31
Word Count 1,135/1,000
Total Word Count 8,979/33,100
Challenge Log
Stories Completed 7/31
Word Count 1,135/1,000
Total Word Count 8,979/33,100
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goldensunds
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I managed to read all of your challenge stories so far and found to like them. There are those among the stories, where I wish were continued more, such as: "Master's Lesson, Into The Crypt, One Shot, and the Changeling." I see One Shot as a slice of life sort of story, where as Master's Lesson could have more insight of the canine's (forgot the name) journey, as he left. The Crypt could be an adventure story (which I assume it is) and have continued, which I read the rules of what your taking. The Changeling...If there was some back-story to it and and it would continue, I think I would read it, since that would interest me the most so far. However...the story, "How the Salamander Plays" was a bit confusing, or I was confused. Then again, I didn't took the time and read it to fast. Anyway...I like what you wrote. And my god, this is the longest I type for anyone on here so far, especially since I don't know them that well. Well...I hope to read what you type next.
peacemakerp66
~peacemakerp66
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Well thank you very much for taking the time to read all my submissions thus far, I hope you continue to enjoy the rest to come. There will most likely be continuations and or completed rewrites of most of these works. Just want to finish the challenge first then I'll get to work on finishing off untold tales.
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