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Enjoy. The first, of the new tablet commissions.
I realised a few things. 1) I suck at tuxes. 2) I still don't like coloring black, and 3) I'm not very good at tails or hands yet. Yay! :D
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Enjoy. The first, of the new tablet commissions.
I realised a few things. 1) I suck at tuxes. 2) I still don't like coloring black, and 3) I'm not very good at tails or hands yet. Yay! :D
>>~{Pineapple Princess Lorena™}
Art ©
All Rights Reserved. Customers/Owners of the characters may re-upload their commissions anywhere they see fit.
Do not remove my signature, and please link back to the original or my user-page on FA or on BlueSky. Thank you. ♥
☺ |:.Linktree.:| <- All of my social media/where the hell else you can find me, although FA is primarily where I am art wise.
☻ |.:BlueSky:.| (Follow me here if you use it and want more of my random updates.)
☺ Wanna tip me or say thanks for drawing? Consider buying me me a |.:Ko-Fi:.|? Or shoot me a tip through the shinies system on FA!~
☻ Add my discord if you want to chat, since that's the fastest way to get a response from me.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1200 x 1200px
File Size 696 kB
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Not sure if you look any criticism, bit if you do highlight the text to see :
Hands themselves are fine, the problem is in the arms. The upper bits are short compared to lower. Lower bits should be the shorter one.
Tux is great, there's nothing looking wrong on it. There's just enough folds and wrinkles, so it still looks classy. The shading looks good to me, and fits the rest of the image. Black/dark grey is not that easy to shade and you did very well here. If you tried to push more things would have got way too dark, or the highlights too bright making things look weird.
The fluff details you have added to the tail kinda make it look weird to me. I cannot really offer any ideas as I am struggling making good looking tails myself for the time being haha.
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Hands themselves are fine, the problem is in the arms. The upper bits are short compared to lower. Lower bits should be the shorter one.
Tux is great, there's nothing looking wrong on it. There's just enough folds and wrinkles, so it still looks classy. The shading looks good to me, and fits the rest of the image. Black/dark grey is not that easy to shade and you did very well here. If you tried to push more things would have got way too dark, or the highlights too bright making things look weird.
The fluff details you have added to the tail kinda make it look weird to me. I cannot really offer any ideas as I am struggling making good looking tails myself for the time being haha.
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Hmm, you're right on the arms, I always have that problem, either i make them too long or too short, haha. :) Thanks for the advice, and i agree with you on the tail, but this tablet's also kinda hard to shade with and the nib's way easier to grind down. Not so sure I like that but I do have my old tablet if it gets to be too annoying/hard to use.
When settling down the arms you want the upper part be long enough that when it is by the side of the char the tip of elbow just about touches the hip bone (I think that is the right term lol). The lower part would be a little shorter. You can get the relative proportions using your own body.
Maybe you can place something on the tablet surface ? My draw-on-screen device has plastic to plastic, no soft nibs... it didn't take much to get used to it and the nib never wears down (or doesn't seem to).
You'll get used to the new soon enough ~
Maybe you can place something on the tablet surface ? My draw-on-screen device has plastic to plastic, no soft nibs... it didn't take much to get used to it and the nib never wears down (or doesn't seem to).
You'll get used to the new soon enough ~
Yay ^^
I think this came out great :3
The only thing I can really think of is to complain about is perhaps avoiding having black in the background behind a black suit.
May just appear bad because I'm on my phone, though.
That aside, I think you did well on all three of those things you mentioned, and I'm happy with this :3
I think this came out great :3
The only thing I can really think of is to complain about is perhaps avoiding having black in the background behind a black suit.
May just appear bad because I'm on my phone, though.
That aside, I think you did well on all three of those things you mentioned, and I'm happy with this :3
Lorena's correct :3
Here's the suit reference ripped right from my commission document: http://redpillzen.com/wp-content/up....._suit_blac.jpg
I love black suits <3
Here's the suit reference ripped right from my commission document: http://redpillzen.com/wp-content/up....._suit_blac.jpg
I love black suits <3
I think you did a great job!
You know I'm not an artist and I'll leave the anatomy critique to those who know what they're doing.
However, you did a wonderful job on the suit. The shading in particular is just plain awesome and you made the black on black color scheme work very well.
I really like the character's expression and fur tones.
You know I'm not an artist and I'll leave the anatomy critique to those who know what they're doing.
However, you did a wonderful job on the suit. The shading in particular is just plain awesome and you made the black on black color scheme work very well.
I really like the character's expression and fur tones.
Hey Lorena, just letting you know I finally uploaded this to my Weasyl account.
If there's any problems, let me know ^^
https://www.weasyl.com/submission/8.....ena-black-suit
If there's any problems, let me know ^^
https://www.weasyl.com/submission/8.....ena-black-suit
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