
Correction on the 109th page of the Golden Week comic
Only now I noticed this mistake in the timestamps in the messages exchanged between Edward and Mike.
And someone came telling me that people in U18-chan noticed this error and are having quite a good time with it, or so I hear.
Now, I take the opportunity to explain that:
In the published version, a message seems to have traveled through time or what.
In the original conversation I had planned, the timestamps makes sense. But the conversation doesn't feels natural.
Edward telling Mike that he quit his job and right afterwards telling Mike to talk about Scott with Derek.
So I changed the order and added an "and" to Edward's message at "14:47" to make it feel more natural.
Edwards confirms that he quit his job, and when Mike asks him what to do (a good three hours later, after having went to the Daily Stripe, and Mike didn't even needed to talk about Scott in the end, since they've accidentally meet Scott and Jane in their way.), he tells him to talk about Scott with Derek and stall him until 4.
And that's it.
As for Edward's plan, you can read it on my Patreon page. I've got two pages posted for Part 4 over there and new pages coming every Friday, just like in here, but with the advantage of being 8 pages ahead in the story.
Look into here if you're interested: https://www.patreon.com/mrbarker
Thanks for your attention, everyone.
And thanks for people on U18-chan for still following the comic, despite the absence of sex and whatnot.
And someone came telling me that people in U18-chan noticed this error and are having quite a good time with it, or so I hear.
Now, I take the opportunity to explain that:
In the published version, a message seems to have traveled through time or what.
In the original conversation I had planned, the timestamps makes sense. But the conversation doesn't feels natural.
Edward telling Mike that he quit his job and right afterwards telling Mike to talk about Scott with Derek.
So I changed the order and added an "and" to Edward's message at "14:47" to make it feel more natural.
Edwards confirms that he quit his job, and when Mike asks him what to do (a good three hours later, after having went to the Daily Stripe, and Mike didn't even needed to talk about Scott in the end, since they've accidentally meet Scott and Jane in their way.), he tells him to talk about Scott with Derek and stall him until 4.
And that's it.
As for Edward's plan, you can read it on my Patreon page. I've got two pages posted for Part 4 over there and new pages coming every Friday, just like in here, but with the advantage of being 8 pages ahead in the story.
Look into here if you're interested: https://www.patreon.com/mrbarker
Thanks for your attention, everyone.
And thanks for people on U18-chan for still following the comic, despite the absence of sex and whatnot.
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