
Caution: Spoilers present in description.
It's been a while since I've written a story. I was overdue, so I decided to finally write one that popped in my head some months back.
I can't think much to say about this story. Some details wound up getting changed. Originally, the second wish would've resulted in Joseph's body being changed to Enoya's, with the third wish leaving Enoya the sole owner of her body with the human Joseph needing to be imagined. But what I did works better, I think, though it would have been interesting to see what would've happened with a taur physically replacing a person in reality.
Also, originally, my character, Fif, would've played the roll of the taur, but she is more personal to me and I wanted to have characters less tied to myself involved in the story.
That's about all I can think of. Well, there is the line "Such a value of respect and fairness." I just know there's some better line than that, but I just couldn't think of it.
So, that's it. Another sad-ending story from me, perhaps even sadder than the last. Or maybe it's just melodramatic. What do you guys think?
It's been a while since I've written a story. I was overdue, so I decided to finally write one that popped in my head some months back.
I can't think much to say about this story. Some details wound up getting changed. Originally, the second wish would've resulted in Joseph's body being changed to Enoya's, with the third wish leaving Enoya the sole owner of her body with the human Joseph needing to be imagined. But what I did works better, I think, though it would have been interesting to see what would've happened with a taur physically replacing a person in reality.
Also, originally, my character, Fif, would've played the roll of the taur, but she is more personal to me and I wanted to have characters less tied to myself involved in the story.
That's about all I can think of. Well, there is the line "Such a value of respect and fairness." I just know there's some better line than that, but I just couldn't think of it.
So, that's it. Another sad-ending story from me, perhaps even sadder than the last. Or maybe it's just melodramatic. What do you guys think?
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