
A dragon has a routine encounter with an extraordinarily pretentious knight, but a visit to the leader of the humans living on his territory reveals that all may not be well on his lands and the next day he discovers just how much trouble he's in.
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This was a lot of fun to write; I've thrown a couple funny lines into stories before, but I've never tried through-and-through comedy before this story and sustaining the laughs throughout an entire plot is surprisingly difficult. And yes, I know the first-person style is somewhat unusual but I think the freedom to go stream-of-consciousness with a character's mind (especially with a character as ADD as the dragon) has more comedic potential so I ran with it; sorry if y'all don't like that sort of thing.
Oh, and it's possible that this dragon is indeed Aunara's brother who she mentioned in Worth the Trouble but I never really decided if that's actually the case.
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
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This was a lot of fun to write; I've thrown a couple funny lines into stories before, but I've never tried through-and-through comedy before this story and sustaining the laughs throughout an entire plot is surprisingly difficult. And yes, I know the first-person style is somewhat unusual but I think the freedom to go stream-of-consciousness with a character's mind (especially with a character as ADD as the dragon) has more comedic potential so I ran with it; sorry if y'all don't like that sort of thing.
Oh, and it's possible that this dragon is indeed Aunara's brother who she mentioned in Worth the Trouble but I never really decided if that's actually the case.
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 25.8 kB
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"It's a pretty large party; the two new parents seem to have bought all of both their families with them, and they've been joined by a local priest--which makes no sense considering the ritual about to take place isn't even remotely Christian--along with a few soldiers and Travin's sorcerer, Michad, who attends every public function I'm involved in."
Sorcerers are also very un-Chirstian. About as un-Chirstian as offerings to dragons are. Having a sourcerer around Chirstians doesn't really make any sense... but you also have a dragon...
Yeah, I guess it's moot.
Sorcerers are also very un-Chirstian. About as un-Chirstian as offerings to dragons are. Having a sourcerer around Chirstians doesn't really make any sense... but you also have a dragon...
Yeah, I guess it's moot.
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