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Chapter Eleven: Cold Comforts
When life has taken a rough turn it's good to embrace the simple things in life to find happiness. Luckily for Stormy, today is the day she's been waiting for a long time. She pushes back all her worries and fears to focus on the wonderful weekend she has planned with her children.
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Stormy, Dutch, Gretchen, Aloe, Amethyst, and Steven © To Me Y'all
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Chapter Eleven: Cold Comforts
When life has taken a rough turn it's good to embrace the simple things in life to find happiness. Luckily for Stormy, today is the day she's been waiting for a long time. She pushes back all her worries and fears to focus on the wonderful weekend she has planned with her children.
If you perfer to read this on Inkbunny, the link is here.
https://inkbunny.net/submissionview.php?id=779953
Stormy, Dutch, Gretchen, Aloe, Amethyst, and Steven © To Me Y'all
Category Story / All
Species Horse
Size 111 x 120px
File Size 54.2 kB
Aww.... This was a cute chapter. I can't say I'm surprised at Dutch, he's got a sexy young girlfriend who's insecure enough to comment on Stormy, but he seems much less of a jerk than I thought he was. At least he seems to be a good dad, insofar as that goes.
I didn't even pick up on the Rainbow Dash hair until she said 20% cooler. ;)
Hehe.
I've also appreciate the fact that you used the code word 'fine'. I've noticed, both IRL and on tv and everywhere I know, when you ask someone how they are and their only answer is 'fine', you know something's wrong. Same with 'nothing' when you ask what's going on. No one has 'nothing' going on or is 'just fine'. These things do not happen.
The kids seem pretty fun, it's nice to finally meet them. :)
I didn't even pick up on the Rainbow Dash hair until she said 20% cooler. ;)
Hehe.
I've also appreciate the fact that you used the code word 'fine'. I've noticed, both IRL and on tv and everywhere I know, when you ask someone how they are and their only answer is 'fine', you know something's wrong. Same with 'nothing' when you ask what's going on. No one has 'nothing' going on or is 'just fine'. These things do not happen.
The kids seem pretty fun, it's nice to finally meet them. :)
This is a really fun chapter to write and I felt it was a very necessary chapter after the last one. It made my heart do little jumping jacks for Stormy to be able to see her kids. As for the little tart that Dutch is seeing, that's a cameo from one of my wife's characters named Gretchen. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8662871/
Just as an FYI silly, you replied to yourself. ;)
Yeah, I agree, it was what needed to happen next, and that's how you can tell you're on to something, the story pretty much writes itself. It was nice to actually meet the oft mentioned kids, though I see chapter 12 is pretty long, though 13 is not nearly as lengthy, but I hope to finish both by this weekend, then I can read some other things on my queue.
Yeah, I agree, it was what needed to happen next, and that's how you can tell you're on to something, the story pretty much writes itself. It was nice to actually meet the oft mentioned kids, though I see chapter 12 is pretty long, though 13 is not nearly as lengthy, but I hope to finish both by this weekend, then I can read some other things on my queue.
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