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So iv'e been continueing my polygon art study at college, experimenting with the use of tones and colours with minimal polyon usage, im thinking it works well but i would like your opinions on what could be better and what can be improved, this is only a stud piece so its not going to be amazing but still let me know :3
Category Artwork (Digital) / Pokemon
Species Pokemon
Size 1280 x 1272px
File Size 190 kB
Nice, I thought you made it in 3D at first, then I saw some imperfections in the bottom right that remind me of Adobe Illustrator.
I suggest (since it's a coursework and you asked so kindly :3 ) :
-put the first porygon in a black background, it will be more neutral.
-replace the first image with one in better quality, it kinda pixelated :/
-remove the black lines in the gray porygon.
-in the bottom right, remove the bugs in the ond of the lines
maybe play with the positions of the porygons like an evolution, first the gray, second the wire, the up right, and the draw
I have an example in hand, I can show you if you allow me to upload it temporally in imgur.
Hope it help you buddy
I suggest (since it's a coursework and you asked so kindly :3 ) :
-put the first porygon in a black background, it will be more neutral.
-replace the first image with one in better quality, it kinda pixelated :/
-remove the black lines in the gray porygon.
-in the bottom right, remove the bugs in the ond of the lines
maybe play with the positions of the porygons like an evolution, first the gray, second the wire, the up right, and the draw
I have an example in hand, I can show you if you allow me to upload it temporally in imgur.
Hope it help you buddy
1.The porygons are in perspective, the minimalist one in the back to the detailed one in front.
Their positions go with where they point their heads. I played with the scale too in order to get an effect of depth.
https://i.imgur.com/up9KTeB.png
2.We see clearly and neutrally the evolution (no one is behind another).
The white line is used to play with the perspective and to keep the spirit of minimalist.
https://i.imgur.com/6kbUWw6.png
I don't know if you have to make an argument when you show your art at school, I wanted to bring some ideas to you of what to say if you pick one of them.
English is not my native language but it's not an excuse
Save those images if you want, I'm gonna remove them this week-end.
I saw your post in /r/furry :3
Their positions go with where they point their heads. I played with the scale too in order to get an effect of depth.
https://i.imgur.com/up9KTeB.png
2.We see clearly and neutrally the evolution (no one is behind another).
The white line is used to play with the perspective and to keep the spirit of minimalist.
https://i.imgur.com/6kbUWw6.png
I don't know if you have to make an argument when you show your art at school, I wanted to bring some ideas to you of what to say if you pick one of them.
English is not my native language but it's not an excuse
Save those images if you want, I'm gonna remove them this week-end.
I saw your post in /r/furry :3
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