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Still a work in progress. Cleaning up my lines a bit, setting up perspective for locker room scene. Hopefully looking ok so far. Perspective's still one of those things I don't do a whole lot. Go go geometry skills!
Constructive criticism welcome.
Constructive criticism welcome.
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 808 x 1000px
File Size 136.2 kB
Well here's a couple of things I notice. Just being constructive, not picky here:
The detailing on Oz is spot on, but the perspective stuff makes it look a little wonky.
Oz looks like he's 10 feet tall in comparison to the bench (but if he is actually 10 feet tall, the merits a "murr" from me, hehehe). But I think that can be rectified by making the legs on the bench longer, perhaps?
The lockers in the background are kind of confusing perspective-wise. It took me a while to realize that the lockers were in front of the poster and I thought the poster was clipped awkwardly. I'm sure that once you shade them, they'll pop out more though.
The detailing on Oz is spot on, but the perspective stuff makes it look a little wonky.
Oz looks like he's 10 feet tall in comparison to the bench (but if he is actually 10 feet tall, the merits a "murr" from me, hehehe). But I think that can be rectified by making the legs on the bench longer, perhaps?
The lockers in the background are kind of confusing perspective-wise. It took me a while to realize that the lockers were in front of the poster and I thought the poster was clipped awkwardly. I'm sure that once you shade them, they'll pop out more though.
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