Took me awhile longer than I'd hoped, but here's page four, with the debut of Lily and Buckley.
Finished in ink wash and watercolors. More pages to come very soon.
Official site: http://www.lilythepanda.com
Finished in ink wash and watercolors. More pages to come very soon.
Official site: http://www.lilythepanda.com
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 912px
File Size 178.1 kB
Your art is pretty good dude, but I think you need to work on your expressions. You draw expressions really well, however they're not always the correct expression it seems. I suppose it'd be that the characters don't appear to be taking the situation very seriously. In the second frame, the assasin looks comically surprised, which, given how tough he acts later on, appears very out of character. Generally, I get the feeling that the way the characters are acting just doesn't fit what's happening. Still, your art is quiet cool, the characters well designed and the use of colours is neat effect.
Heh, actually, you hit the nail on the head with interpreting the expressions. The assassins do have a bit of a comic relief element to them. Also, Lily and Buckley are most definitely not taking the situation very seriously at all... as we'll find out, these two assassins are just the latest in an entire string of failed attempts, so L&B are more like, "Ugh... not again." than anything else.
Thanks!
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