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JeffrazorX of his two characters in an eating competition.

Edit: Fixed all the Velrock typos.

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JeffrazorX ~jeffrazorx

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10 years ago

That was an excellent story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I will point out one thing though there is no "r" in Velock's name.

Orion89 ~orion89

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10 years ago

Oops. I think I got the initial correction message backwards thinking Velock should have been Velrock.

JeffrazorX ~jeffrazorx

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10 years ago

We all mess up sometimes ya?

Orion89 ~orion89

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10 years ago

Yup. Just important for focus on the big success rather than the small mistakes.

BentheMew ~3jaustin

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10 years ago

Actually, I'm pretty sure there's at least one pokedex entry somewhere hintint to there being carnivorous pokemon. (more specifically, Mightyena's pokedex entry somewhere, thought can't remember where or if that's the correct one)

Cheesecaker ~cheesecaker

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10 years ago

Cocoa was well written here, i love the way one pikachu loves the idea of being squashed by her and the other fears it ^^

Orion89 ~orion89

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10 years ago

Glad you liked it. There can be a real thin line between love and fear and that includes being squashed beneath one large and in charge Raichu. ^^

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