Sora Dazzel the Pirate hunter comic page 5 is now done
I hope you all like
this comic is for a friend about their char and her adventures.
please enjoy and help this comic to continue ^^
"Details to see more pages"
to see this comic to be continued simply note me that you like to pay for the next page.
This is a comic that meant to continue for the people who want to see it continued.
the price for each page is ££18 pounds for each pages.
Sora Dazzel and the Succubus belong to Vosur
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/vosur/
Sora dazzel the pirate hunter
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
I hope you all like
this comic is for a friend about their char and her adventures.
please enjoy and help this comic to continue ^^
"Details to see more pages"
to see this comic to be continued simply note me that you like to pay for the next page.
This is a comic that meant to continue for the people who want to see it continued.
the price for each page is ££18 pounds for each pages.
Sora Dazzel and the Succubus belong to Vosur
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/vosur/
Sora dazzel the pirate hunter
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 902 x 1280px
File Size 304.8 kB
well i'd like to point out that you have a few typos. the word "an" is used before words that start with vowels like a, e, ,i ,o ,u, and y when its used as a vowel. Us "a" instead like the way you used it in "get myself an ship" should be "get myself a ship". if used incorrectly the sentence sounds off. though hit can sound off if used correctly as well.
http://english.stackexchange.com/qu.....-in-a-sentence
just a little to help make better flowing English sentences.
i like the story by the way.
http://english.stackexchange.com/qu.....-in-a-sentence
just a little to help make better flowing English sentences.
i like the story by the way.
FA+

Comments