dear this is not so much a rant more like creative criticism which i do understand but given the fact that erin is a child and possibly a new sonic fan give her time to cultivate her ocs just like you did yours

I've herd some where Erin been a sonic fan since she was 10.

maybe she needs alittle going up to do, i mean i understand completely where she does come off as a mary sue but come on almost all ocs started out that way and it took people years to craft and cultivate their characters the way they wanted them to be

I'll admit That is very true.

so dont be too harsh on erin at least not yet

I try not to.

i know, but plz try to help her when u can

That..I've tried but you know....

yup

Mostly I got hungry. But yeh, this is a very good review and good pointers too! I always hate when people add in stuff that mae no sense unless explained, like when I drew Elizabeth and added a reason for her to be friends with Rouge and in some way then has a reason for why she met Shadow.

This is a really good piece of constructive critism here Krispina. Shame she hid it though.

It's as my saying goes; There is a difference between drawing/writing and being an artist/author. You cannot be considered an artist/author unless you take both the positive and the negative equally.

Sadly Erin won't accept this as a form of improvement.
She really needs to learn.

Yeah. and no surprise she would of hidden it.

Yeah that sums up the story 8/ We tried to read it and we couldn't get past two chapters without losing brain cells XD

like a said. a burnt cake cover in frosting!