This was, initially, written for my Weasyl account about... four or five months ago? Probably more. I wasn't very satisfied with it, and I'm still not. But eh, I want to upload some of my own "work", so here goes. I have this chapter, which is technically the prologue, done as well as the one after that.

See, I wasn't happy with the names I picked for the Weasyl version. For one, Adeous was known as Roccash, and Kaos was "Kao Brine". When I went back to revise it for this upload, I decided to switch some of the names around. They are, as follows;

Kao Brine -> Kaos
Roccash -> Adeous
Suvan -> Shouvan

This was done to fit with the in-universe cultures of these races, as well as to add some mysticism to Kaos. I also had to reformat the file, as it was written with indents and formatting not supported by FA.

Oh well. Enjoy!

(Also, a fantastic thumbnail by  tungstenkitten)

Story ©  kaedal
Thumbnail ©  tungstenkitten