So wicked cool. ^_^

Normally I wouldn't mention it but since you did just ask for CC they whole chest area is... odd. The vertical lines are pretty straight indicating a flat surface, but the highlights indicate the character is rather chesty which would distort the clothing. The lighting angle for the chest is inconsistent, and by extrapolation from the shapes depicted the left breast would be about three times the size of the right and should continue out over the arm.

And the worst part is since it's a bright line hanging out in negative space near the center of the image it's distracting as hell from the rest of the piece, at least for me. When the image was in thumbnail I couldn't see it and it isn't often I'm disappointed at looking at a full size image.

That said, I really like the overall composition of the piece. The character placement, just a leg coming in from off screen conveying that they're not alone and information is imprecise. It really is just a few lines that are problematic, reminds me of something Jolly Jack posted recently http://jollyjack.deviantart.com/art.....ecta-512064765

Now this reminds me that I really need to draw some White Shadow stuff since I've been slacking off on that.

I'm enjoying the blocks of colour and simple shapes you've used here, and all those highlights for the details. :)