verynice work

i figured something else out

the way you curl your mouths at the tip almost always denotes a kind of secondary "happy" expression - i'd experiment with that shape a bit and branching it in different directions :]

Apparently, I can't see that.

BUT I'LL DO SOMETHING SOMEWHERE AND TRY TO FIX IT.

Thanks for the honesty, sweets. <3

NOTHING IS WRONG WITH IT NOTHING IS WRONG WITH IT NOTHING IS WRONG WITH IT DEAR GOD IT IS EPIC WIN!

The eyes, the only thing that you need to work on is the eyes.... they need more emotion, your other flows are very well

agreed

Hmm. Any tips on that?

"Jackal Queenston: they all kind of have the same base shape - try toying with angling them differently"

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use the upper and lower eyelids to your advantage - you don't seem to do that enough

I would say experiment with more with eye reflection and depth, simple yet complex, it usually only takes a couple little lines to make all the difference when it comes to a eye

Upper left face 'looking up-ish?': Their left jaw (stage-left) seems a little larger than the right, I think.

Upper right: Stage-right ear is larger by a tiny bit than stge-left.

Mid right: 'Can I keep it, mom?'- Stage-right ear seems larger than the stage left- perspectives can be a complete pain though, I can relate!

Bottom/Center Left: 'When I get these cuffs off, you're dead!' Again the ears seem to be mismatching a little.

Bottom Right: perked ear looks painfully perked.

I really want to be more constructive on the criticisms, but I can't really find much of anything else wrong, nor am I a professional or 'schooled' sketch artist by any means. Merf.

Some of the ears are bigger because they're closer than the other.

But for the most part: gotta thank you for the input. I'll work on it. :3

I'll agree with hthe eye comments.
To me your muzzles are very suiting to your style.

But yes, use eyelids a little more, sometimes it seems like they have none

Also just a suggestion, you may get alot of feral requests one day or some, so also take this time to practice feral anatomy, I'm not one to talk really cause I haven't taken the time, but just a meer suggestion <3

I love you gurl! Keep up the good work :)

P.S. DON'T BE AFRAID TO TRY DIFFERENT THINGS :) <33333333333

Heheh. Thanks muchly, Yuch.

I actually work on ferals quite often, BUT I NEVER POST THEM BECAUSE I DO NOT FINISH. I need to work on feral poses, sooo... maybe when I get around to practicing the whole enchilada. XD

D'awwww cute gimme cookies face isc ute l3
I dont have any crit cause to me these are great, and i dont have it itn me to be mean ><

Crit is not mean.

I AM MEAN.

AND I AM NOT CRIT.

Damn you and your good points that make no sense in a way that..makes sense?! xD
still, i dont see anything wrong with ones Dx

The leany-forwards one in the lower right seems like the belly (and maybe boobs?) should be hanging down/curving downwards a bit more.

Heheh. Muchly thanks for the honesty, yo. :3

EVERYTHING
YOU FAIL AS AN ARTIST
PACK YOUR BAGS AND GO HOME

OH OKAY
THANKS FOR LETTING ME PLAY
CAN I COME BACK FOR THE REUNION SPECIAL?

Hmmm..
NO.


XD In all seriousness though, I'm not sure how to critique these. It all just looks like.. your own style!! ^^; Any critique I would give would make it look like someone else's, which only ends in FAIL and FURRY DRAMA >.O

The eyes for the three topmost ones.

I actually have about the same comments. I think there's a slight perspective disagreement on some of the noses - the nose in several of the above seems flatter than the side-view warrants. Might do a couple pages of focus-sketches on muzzle and face, and see if that matches up the way you like. I can tell you that if you start with the nose then work up the muzzle, leaving the nose flat on a side view tends to make the backside of the muzzle too big and crowds the far eye.


The other thing I'd suggest is to draw a few head sketches without fur. The best way to focus on where the ears attach will be to find your pivot-point, then take out the fur and draw the cartilage/skin structure underneath. Once you lock in where the ear fits on the skull, the expressions from the pivots and ear tilts will come across with more impact.


That being said, these are awesome. I'd totally pet the cute-eyes, even knowing I'd likely not get my hand back.

the many faces of rasasha

I LOVE the bottom-left picture. =D It's SO COOL.

Anyway...you've gotten loads of con/crit now, and I can't think of anything to say, so I'll settle with saying the whole page is made of awesome. =D

That is my crowning achievement of sketches.

It's not perfect, BUT IT'S SO MUCH CLOSER THAN I'VE BEEN TO GETTING IT RIGHT.

IT'S SO COOL. o__o I love it. I just keep staring at it and going, "...It's sooo cooool. X3"