
Category All / Fat Furs
Species Gecko
Size 893 x 1280px
File Size 249 kB
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Work's done, time for games. Also sudden surprise!
Small critic about the last two panels though; the motion between the two seems kind of inconsistent. In one she's walking right looking at the paper, and the next is a close up looking left at something surprising, assuming it's not the paper that surprised her. I don't know it just seems kind of jarring doing an about face like that. Maybe if it was the same as the sixth panel but her looking up from the paper or something...
Well that's just my take on it and a nit pick at that, I just don't want to seem annoying for it. Still I really like your comic so far!
Small critic about the last two panels though; the motion between the two seems kind of inconsistent. In one she's walking right looking at the paper, and the next is a close up looking left at something surprising, assuming it's not the paper that surprised her. I don't know it just seems kind of jarring doing an about face like that. Maybe if it was the same as the sixth panel but her looking up from the paper or something...
Well that's just my take on it and a nit pick at that, I just don't want to seem annoying for it. Still I really like your comic so far!
Indeed!
And yeah, I had trouble figuring out how to convey the motion in this one. I actually had to split this page into two (12 & 13) to make it flow better. Hopefully it flows better contextually once page 13 is posted. Alternatively I was not sure how to break this into a good ending panel.
And yeah, I had trouble figuring out how to convey the motion in this one. I actually had to split this page into two (12 & 13) to make it flow better. Hopefully it flows better contextually once page 13 is posted. Alternatively I was not sure how to break this into a good ending panel.
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