I think it looks great! There is one change i would like to make tho, I think it will look better if their backs are closer together, right now the picture is very wide. I can easily move my charicter to the right once i do the line art, that is if you dont mind. Also Ill probialy leave the blades off the snake tail.

Other than that I love it, especialy the poses, you make action poses way better than me.

Okay. Cool. I was a little worried that you wasn't gonna like it. I'm glad you like it. And I will remove the blades off the snake.

I'll work on it on the side since I have other work but do.t worry I'll be glad to do it. Also I can remove the blades in the line art process.

Cool, but I need to add a few more things to it before the sketch is complete.

ok, just tell me when your done