I wanted to redraw an old piece to try and get my hand caught up to my eye. as I think thats my primary problem right now.

I'm not 100% sure how I feel about the outcome of this. Dana has definitely changed for the better design wise anyway.

I'm a little annoyed that the older piece isnt from 09, 2010 is a little embarrassing.

Anyway, what do you think? Things I should work on? What should I try?

Sorry commissioners, I'm working to get my standard back up to par! So hold on a little longer <3!!!