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This is in scraps for a reason! The texture work is very early, and her hair needs more modification. I wanted to give people a taste so my account wasn't so dead, tho. I'm torn whether or not to stick with the black lines on her face and torso.
I made some alterations and changed the pose to something more familiar.
I made some alterations and changed the pose to something more familiar.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Sonic
Species Squirrel
Size 521 x 681px
File Size 114.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Ooh, how interesting! I've been seeing a resurgence of love for this character. She looks good so far! I'm definitely liking the direction you've taken it overall.
Critique: The hair would look good if you made it fully cover the head, but I'm sure you knew that. The ears should be a good bit smaller, at least 50%, as she has some small squirrel ears. Her shoulders and upper arms seem to be a bit on the wide side in comparison with the hips. And finally, the secondary fur area around her chest seems to go a bit wide. It probably shouldn't extend too far beyond the breasts, if any. This is a WIP as you stated, I just wanted to throw that in there.
Also, personally, I think the fur coloration would look better lineless. How exactly are you texturing it, anyway? Anything I could help with? :)
Critique: The hair would look good if you made it fully cover the head, but I'm sure you knew that. The ears should be a good bit smaller, at least 50%, as she has some small squirrel ears. Her shoulders and upper arms seem to be a bit on the wide side in comparison with the hips. And finally, the secondary fur area around her chest seems to go a bit wide. It probably shouldn't extend too far beyond the breasts, if any. This is a WIP as you stated, I just wanted to throw that in there.
Also, personally, I think the fur coloration would look better lineless. How exactly are you texturing it, anyway? Anything I could help with? :)
Hair is a real pain in Poser, so I know there's a lot of work there to go. I can modify her proportions more, but it's hard to get it to look balanced. I texture it in an art program, drawing a layer over the basic Krystal texture, so it's a lot of trial and error. This already helps a lot, thank you!
I picked her because I realized the structural similarities, and Little Dragon put in some very expansive controls for what could have been a straight model port. The hardest things are the hair, tail, and the number of fingers. I'm not going to change her fingers, and I'm happy with her tail, so it's mostly her hair and outfit left, and a better set of textures.
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