Instant Fave!!!

I'm a bit... speechless at the moment.

:D :D :D

I'm glad you liked it! Was the ending OK??

It was very nice, I really liked all the story, really, really much. And I have two thoughts at th moment: Fanart and another trade, because you're such a good author.

There's some grammatic errors, which I repress with a good heart, and some minor technical details (word flaws), which I also repress with a good heart.
Of course there are some... what to call it... setting errors, which you can't do nothing about really. Those are my fault.
This is not really criticism, since I really, really love it.


It ripped the pain open, which is not your fault either. I'm just having a hard time at the moment.

I wish you had a Paypal account so I could pay you for this.

Good good :) And if you're willing for another, I'd be happy too, although I may take a little longer this time ^^;

:D There's always grammar faults, although hopefully not too many! ^^; As for the setting, well, you know ;) It'll take a while for me to learn it all!

Awh :( I hope it gets better soon :D The happy ending to make you better?

And no paying! Your art was more than enough in return :)

True art takes it's time, so it's okay.

I ought to do more distribtions of the world he live in, and how the Government works and so. It's would help you, I guess. Or hold him outside my worlds, let him play in yours?

It did sting a bit. My life is a mess at the moment.

Suuure~~

Good good :D

And sure! It's great to read your stuff (you're a great writer too) and it'd be nice for future refs!

:( I do hope you feel better soon!

Really, it is!

I really want to do a collab or something with you, though that must be pretty hard for writers. But the trade I'll do anytime, really.

Which reminds me: Are you planning on writing more with that evil creature, or can I borrow it?

I hope so too. One of my professors took me into his office to talk about it earlier today. And my mom and Zoph are trying their best too. I just feel so stressed all the time, I can't even sleep proberly.

I think I'm happy to hear that~

Well, if you want to give it a go, by all means! Maybe you could draw something and I could give it a story, like you and Zophia did?

You're more than welcome to use him/her/it! ^^ I just tried to come up with something unusual :)

Well, it's good to see that you have so much support!

You should be :) You're drawings, honestly, are fantastic :) They're more than enough return for my little ramble! :D

Could be a massive amount of fun... Still Kai as the subject, or are you tired of him?

I just want to see a sequel (yes, Kai must defeat that monster!!!)

Yup. It was a little weird, though.

.///. But I is liek your rambles!!

No, I'm not tired of him :) He's a great character! Although, the subject choice is your's!

And definitely :D Maybe you write the sequel for this one? If not, give me a few hints for setting and things, and I'd be more than happy too!

Naturally! But supportive weirdness, at least!

Thanks :) It does mean a lot that you like it! I'm never sure if it's actually any good or not...

Hmm, I'll think of something... And for the record. While writing, you're welcome to write and ask me questions. If you want, you can have my msn-address?

I could do the sequel, it might be fun~~ But it's okay, if you want to do it too. It's your monster~

Yah~

I liked it a lot, it really expresses a lot.

Sure :) I'm online right now (on MSN) XD

Well, indeed! Plus, its your world plus your char, so ;)

:D

I'm glad of it, really :) It's nice to know you did! It's good to think that someone in another country liked something I wrote! :D

Yeis!!

I like other writing about him, though~

^^

It's not that far away^^

:D

Maybe turn it into a little saga-type thing? We do alternating entries?

And that's true ^^ But still, it makes a difference being around different people! :)

^^

It could be fun^^ I should write the next chapter for the other first, though. Or I'll never finish it > <

It does, yes~

Definitely! And don't worry - as you said, sometimes, the longer the better :D

:D

I've tried to write fiction that lasted no longer than two chapters, because I lost patience with it.

XD I know that feeling! I've started many a story that never made it to to the end :(

That's just bad. But Kai is fun to write about, so I can manage that.

True :) Most of the things I write star off fun, but then I get a new idea, want to write about that, and lose the train of thought from the last one! XD

Oh, that's the bad one!!

I know XD I'm so lazy when it comes to writing ^^;

Heh^^
*is rather tired, smiles drugged*

XD

*smiles back*

Happy, tired though?

Yees... Happi~~

I'm stuck at writin > <

:D Happy is good!

Awh :( I know that feeling!! XD

o^__^o

It sucks.... My head is drowsy...

:D

Awh... That's no good :( Maybe just have a short sleep?

You know, the time difference is a positive hour, meaning it's 8 pm here. I don't think I have time for a nap...

But writin!

I guess that's a fair point! Maybe just sleep a little earlier?

Yeah... Hmm, should I eat today....

Btw:
Pain.
His whole back was in flames it seemed. This was the very first thing he sensed as he slowly gained consciousness. The next was cold and the sound of a low humming near his ear. He was lying on a metal floor, seemingly inside a truck or the like. His hands and legs were tied together in the most uncomfortable way he had tried for a long time, and the burn on his back was constantly irritated by his shoulderblades moving.

:D Tis always a good idea!

And that's brill! :D Is it the beginning, or a sample?

I haven't eaten for... a day and a half.

It's the very beginning^^ You remember how the last chapter ended? This is how he wakes up, that lucky guy.

:O No wonder you're so tired!!!!!

Ah, good :D Well, it sounds great so far :)

Naaah...

Oh, I see more pain and suffering in his nearest future. Those creatures like to play with their prey.

Yup!! ;)

Awh :( But still, well written pain?

Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~

Of course?
The boy groaned, his head constantly leaping in and out of delusional pieces of dreams. Lying still, resting his weary head at the cold, humming floor, he slowly came to his senses. At first all seemed dark to him, but moments later he could make out the walls and ceiling of the box he was in, and a figure in a corner. The humming filled his head, and he fell back into the shifting dreams made of shock and pain once again.
yES, IT'S JUST BECAUSE I CAN.

Yuuuuup XD

Well, as sad as it is, it's rather marvellous nonetheless! :)

Naah.

He woke up when something heavy and limp fell on him. His back burned like never before, and in that position, his ribcase was pressed against the cool foundation. It hurt slightly less than the burn, he noticed. But the pose was highly uncomfortable and the pressure against his ribs made him gasp for breath. He coughed a little, tried to move either the object on top of him, or himself, without succes. He felt consciousness slip out of his grip once more.
Last bit, just forthe fun of it.

XD I'm never going to win this, am I?

Awh, poor Kai :( But still, nicely written again :) I'll be eagerly awaiting the rest now!!

I am veryveryveryvery stubborn, so no.

I do too ^^() They just threw a girl on him - -

XD I noticed!! ;)

Ah!

You have???!

She's unconscious, and heavy.

Of course ;)

Naturally! Friend or foe?

HOW?!

She's human, so friend, maybe?

XD Your conversations with Zoph? And the fact that you're adamant not to eat XD

Maybe :)

FINALLY!!!! YOU POSTED SOMETHING!!!!

INSTANT FAV FOR THE AWESOMENESS FACTOR!!!!

Your better at doing really FAST in depth descriptions than I am, I should work on that ^_^

:D It takes time, Master Mechan! XD

But I'm good to also liked it! ^^

Thanks :) Your descriptions are good too :D I just like to add them in as the story progresses, rather than just have a big block of description ;)

Thats just it though, I need to stop doing that

But I is workin on it ^_^

XD Fair enough!

Good good :)