
You look to the right and see this.
What do?
What do?
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/253.....ccident-mature Ptchoo~ Done and done.
You shit. >:C You triggered my OCD. Chrome didn't tell me of any typing errors.
Sentence errors, probably so. I'm more used to greentext writing, and it was late while making up the story.
Also, no editor for me. I don't enjoy having someone read over something and pick it apart. Makes me feel bad.
Sentence errors, probably so. I'm more used to greentext writing, and it was late while making up the story.
Also, no editor for me. I don't enjoy having someone read over something and pick it apart. Makes me feel bad.
Well, some people quitting reading only because of a constant switching between present and past tense makes you feel worse, amirite?
I'm kinda used to ignoring errors like that though, so it didn't bother me much. Just thought I'd mention.
And the only typos I noticed were you using "she" instead of "the" - chrome obviously doesn't tell because both are real words.
I'm kinda used to ignoring errors like that though, so it didn't bother me much. Just thought I'd mention.
And the only typos I noticed were you using "she" instead of "the" - chrome obviously doesn't tell because both are real words.
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