Mas welcomes a rookie to the wonderful world of secrets, aliens, and giant robots, but something's not quite right with the new guy.
Part of the Frontlines verse. Set after the original story.
Just something quick and cute to get me back in the habit of writing again.
quick edit done by
hetzer
Part of the Frontlines verse. Set after the original story.
Just something quick and cute to get me back in the habit of writing again.
quick edit done by
hetzer
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 114px
File Size 74.5 kB
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As soon as I saw "The male's expression was a bit vacant, tail and ears completely lifeless." I was hoping it was going reveal him to be Marcus in that mech suit used in F. Project
I always wondered when reading F. Project if the Tenabi had a hand in helping make the suit look and act more like a real one. Good job detailing the mannerisms they got wrong throughout the meeting. On one hand, I would say that maybe the constant amount of repeatedly pointing out something was off might have been giving it away a bit too much, but then again I remember many didn't seem to realize he was a mech suit in F. Project even when it was to the point where it was practically spelled out.
Though I didn't expect the mech's flesh to be real, I share Mas's sentiment in finding that a bit disturbing... ah heh.
Also liked the bit how Mas couldn't see the mech as a person until she found out who was piloting it. .... oh, and speaking of which, I'm starting to like Dr. Lorry
(... and I am embarrassed to admit that I still didn't realize why this was called "Reintroductions" until a while after I had finished reading it and was typing this response)
I always wondered when reading F. Project if the Tenabi had a hand in helping make the suit look and act more like a real one. Good job detailing the mannerisms they got wrong throughout the meeting. On one hand, I would say that maybe the constant amount of repeatedly pointing out something was off might have been giving it away a bit too much, but then again I remember many didn't seem to realize he was a mech suit in F. Project even when it was to the point where it was practically spelled out.
Though I didn't expect the mech's flesh to be real, I share Mas's sentiment in finding that a bit disturbing... ah heh.
Also liked the bit how Mas couldn't see the mech as a person until she found out who was piloting it. .... oh, and speaking of which, I'm starting to like Dr. Lorry
(... and I am embarrassed to admit that I still didn't realize why this was called "Reintroductions" until a while after I had finished reading it and was typing this response)
It's a robot, and this story is actually a sequel to one of his earlier works: Frontlines. First part is here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/903041/.
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