Here it is; this is the most controversial thing I've ever written, even though all I want to do is be openly honest with all of you about myself.
Category Poetry / All
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Size 117 x 120px
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A very laborious work of art you have here, dare I say. You obviously delivered a lot of passion and diligence in elaborating something of this size.
I appreciate how it inspires the reader to appreciate the small, and at first glance, discouraging things in life and how your art teaches to see the positive, only to then gradually fall in a more darker theme as it criticizes the human state of today.
It is also a very twisting poem, one that changes between emotions and perspectives, how it pits simplicity and the pretentiousness of our modern day into battle. I like it.
Good job.
I appreciate how it inspires the reader to appreciate the small, and at first glance, discouraging things in life and how your art teaches to see the positive, only to then gradually fall in a more darker theme as it criticizes the human state of today.
It is also a very twisting poem, one that changes between emotions and perspectives, how it pits simplicity and the pretentiousness of our modern day into battle. I like it.
Good job.
I gotta say, this was a very strong poem you wrote.
I do have to admit that technology is really just a double-edged sword, but noting by your experience, it seemed to cause quite some harm. But it's also how all of us got together to begin with.
This poem just shows the deep passion and twists within how our modern society is like and I believe that the U.S. government needs to wake up and just make it all better again. It's no wonder why America's falling down and other countries making fun of us. Especially Brazil.
I give you kudos, Bandmaster.
I do have to admit that technology is really just a double-edged sword, but noting by your experience, it seemed to cause quite some harm. But it's also how all of us got together to begin with.
This poem just shows the deep passion and twists within how our modern society is like and I believe that the U.S. government needs to wake up and just make it all better again. It's no wonder why America's falling down and other countries making fun of us. Especially Brazil.
I give you kudos, Bandmaster.
Yet America makes fun of Brazil because of stuff like these (the following links are NSFW and inappropriate):
www.youtube.com/watch?v=-D7H0BM6HZo
www.youtube.com/watch?v=iR1UOeoPYHo
www.youtube.com/watch?v=62Z4U_eZnYs
www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wVYjdLgnfI
Every country has their own flaws you know.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=-D7H0BM6HZo
www.youtube.com/watch?v=iR1UOeoPYHo
www.youtube.com/watch?v=62Z4U_eZnYs
www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wVYjdLgnfI
Every country has their own flaws you know.
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