This story hit me a few days ago. It is meant to be a short story written mostly in a narration style as if the main character is telling you the story. So please read this and let me know what you think keep in mind this is the first rough draft without any corrections.

Also keep in mind i am making the following changes in the final version.

*Flushing out the friend character as well as giving him a name

*Adding more for the present day section at the end (mainly about them growing up in their new lives)

*expanding more on the bond they two characters had in their previous life and how it developed


Those are my general plans for now. But please read this give me any input you want. I plan on putting this short story up on the google book store for 99 cents so please let me know if once i finish the final draft if you would pay that for this book. Any who help me by giving advice, corrections and other such help will be given credit on a page at the end.

Also to any artist out there. If you wish to do a cover picture for this please let me know i am willing to give you 25% of all the profit i make off the book. I already have a image in mind and shouldn't be to hard for someone to do. Please make sure you have a fair amount of examples of your work for me to see if i will choose you.