I LOVE IT!!!! Wow, that's almost exactly how I envisioned him. The coat, the beak, wow!! And that stern look on his face, I can see why Nox is scared of him!! GREAT WORK!! Don't change a thing!

Oh, BTW, the name is Browen (it was brown until I typed an E in after the W). And thanks for coming up with the name for Renu (perfect timing, really!!). I just need names for the rest of the members of Backway (and an idea what the drummer is species/sex wise).

This novel is coming along so fast and so good, it scares me!! Last time I had something get done this easily (and enjoyably) was seven years ago!! Thanks for letting me enjoy writing agaiN!!

i'm so glad you're enjoying this. you're writing is excellent and fun to read. i'll get on the names as quickly as possible.