Another nice work! Don't see many squirrel transformation stories let alone with Dr. Seuss characters! Glad you could do that request! I still really like your emphasis on the tail transformation and quick mental manipulation/acceptance!

Quackington's idea, I'm just the keyboard the put it into a word document :D But it was a nice change of pace. Usually my Tfs are long

Now that I read it, I think that short 1500 word story was one of my better written ones. Now I got a hankering to do more like it. SPIT SOME IDEAS AT ME!!!!

Lab- animal testing- backfire- family

School- classes- weird questions on tests- weird activites at the physical education

Jungle- explorer- danger- adoption- trying to escape

Boardgame- cards with werid stuff you have to do- must complete

Reality fail- weird things happen that makes the subject "move" to werid conclutions

Group trend- it is "in" to have "fake" tails right now- want to be cool

You are welcome!

Can you elaborate on the reality fail?

It is when reality cease being normal.

You hav kinda done that before in your ocra one with the changing rooms.

Another example is: haviong alot of diffrent channels but this day it is only about donkeys

Then reality itself is what leads/changing the subject but ofc it can have a operator behind it, like the mom in the ocra story

If you're still in a squirrel mood, maybe a new city park that opens, everyone being oblivious that it's actually a new residence area, and people start mistaking it for their own, squirrely home...

Maybe a worldwide chicken appreciation day, where everyone would stop to think about how wonderful they are, only to think and act like chickens themselves!

Even maybe a elephant in the zoo that wants to adopt a family from the visitors!

I like those ideas, except for the chickens and elephants, two animals I won't do

could you explain your first idea there a little more in depth?

Haha no problem, but fair warning, I'm not a very good writer, and yeah, I was just throwing out different animal ideas XP

Anyways I like the idea that the park was built (anonymously or maybe even by Sarah ;) ) as a recreational park with plenty of oak trees for people to relax and play in. But little do people the subtle scent of acorns is what naturally draws them there and as soon as they step throught the entrance, the spell takes ahold of them as start enjoying the park and its native squirrels there, slowly changing into squirrels physically and mentally (similar to Sally for reference) and soon believe accept that the park is where they belong and had belong as home.

But hey, that's only the idea! I'm not really a creative enough writer for characters and dialogue. Maybe the subjects should be of families and couples. Well that's my idea!

Btw, I'm really enjoying your additions you've made to the interactive stories on writing.com!

good idea. Think I might do that

Best Squirrel TF story I've read so far, short but fun and packed with good descriptions!

D'awww thanks. Didn't know people are still reading a year old story

I always feel odd commenting on something that's been posted for so long. Sort of like bringing back a dead thread. But I feel that's not fair, I mean art is art. Last I checked people still visit museums with works hundreds of years old. So If I see or read something Very good like this I just have to give credit where credit is due.