
http://annushkathesetter.deviantart.....ober-100412645 - detail shot.
NO MORE DETAILED ART FOR ME PLZ. x_____x Impressionism rules from now on. Anyways...
This is my contribution to the Werewolf Calendar held by
myenia and Zakka. The site can be viewed here: http://werewolfcalendar.com Pre-ordering has already started, release is in November.
The only thing I regret is that I didn't have much time for this picture, 3 months is definately not enough. :D Being in line with uberawesome artists was a great honor for me, and I wish I could do more. Okay, I stop. xP Jim says I can only say negative stuff about my work, so I shut up.
NO MORE DETAILED ART FOR ME PLZ. x_____x Impressionism rules from now on. Anyways...
This is my contribution to the Werewolf Calendar held by

The only thing I regret is that I didn't have much time for this picture, 3 months is definately not enough. :D Being in line with uberawesome artists was a great honor for me, and I wish I could do more. Okay, I stop. xP Jim says I can only say negative stuff about my work, so I shut up.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 825 x 638px
File Size 474.2 kB
This is a wonderful piece. I admire and appreciate the detail added in. I also like how you unified your foreground and background.
My only critique would be that I don`t feel the visual connection between the submissive and dominant wolf. I feel that the submissive wolf is looking out in the open, or is in a daze, and that the alpha is looking off at the left and not at what hes snarling at. His pupils seem a bit large for this situation aswell. I think theyd be much smaller with this intimidating expression. If the pupils were smaller, and looking more downward I think it would arrange this issue. And if the submissive wolf were looking up and directly at his adversary.
Just my two cents though.
My only critique would be that I don`t feel the visual connection between the submissive and dominant wolf. I feel that the submissive wolf is looking out in the open, or is in a daze, and that the alpha is looking off at the left and not at what hes snarling at. His pupils seem a bit large for this situation aswell. I think theyd be much smaller with this intimidating expression. If the pupils were smaller, and looking more downward I think it would arrange this issue. And if the submissive wolf were looking up and directly at his adversary.
Just my two cents though.
Great body positioning. You definitely have the dominance/submission display down here. I don't like to critique without asking, but someone has already mentioned the point I would have pointed out as well. The dominant wolf's eyes would be cut lower and downward focused intently on the subordinant/submissive pack member. The submissive pack member may cut eyes away or look off almost in placation though. You can get the sort of eye positions you have displayed here, but it's a brief moment in time and doesn't translate the dominance/submission display as well. I love the piece and hope you don't see this commentary as negative, but instead just informative. Your work is wonderful =)
Here's a few dominance and/or submission display refs just for fun. I've totally seen this positioning you have displayed here and thought I had a photo of it. I'll have to work to capture it behind the lens. Anyhow, the pics:
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ience-59748518
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....lease-52320768
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....mm-Hi-45521185
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/...../Rawr-45520958
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....-Nose-45101095
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....aying-44643424
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ssion-44642235
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....-Good-44580904
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....h-You-44580379
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ns-No-41168444
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....n-Run-41167825
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....inion-35250221
Here's a few dominance and/or submission display refs just for fun. I've totally seen this positioning you have displayed here and thought I had a photo of it. I'll have to work to capture it behind the lens. Anyhow, the pics:
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ience-59748518
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....lease-52320768
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....mm-Hi-45521185
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/...../Rawr-45520958
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....-Nose-45101095
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....aying-44643424
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ssion-44642235
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....-Good-44580904
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....h-You-44580379
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....ns-No-41168444
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....n-Run-41167825
http://timberwolf4u.deviantart.com/.....inion-35250221
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