here is the inked version. no more changes requested from commissioner so it's full steam ahead. While I used to all my inked with a brush and rapidograph waterproof ink, I've been using an inking pen more and more. My favourite is the a type of Tombow, waterproof brush pen from Japan. It works wonderfully for this kind of pic and allows a nice variance of line. "Tonight I will paint this with watercolours.

9x12 ink on watercolour pad