A very nice beginning after the first backstory. I must admit, it's a bit difficult to read, if you don't know all of these anime characters. Fortunately I know the most of them or at least heard from them, so I can follow the story pretty well. This went a very interesting way, I'm curious how it went forth.

Your writing style is very good and you always placed some little details and explanations about the characters and the story, that's very good. Maybe you could split some longer text passages in more sections, but otherwise it's a very great beginning.

update: It's not the "Ghostly Field Club" but I fixed it, it's called "The Sealing Club"

Ok, thanks for that information. Maybe you should check your other chapters for that too. I saw in the second chapter "Ghostly Field Club" at least two times too.

ok fixed