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A very good chapter again, I love the imagination of Primordial Darkness, could be a nice improvement for my own dark powers, hehe. And I like the sound of this name, hehehe.
You described the battle well and I'm curious, how it goes forth now. You should only be careful not too fast to pull out all the stops, you should let you space to improve the intensivity of the battles and the story and maybe check here and there for some little typos. But apart from that you did a very good job again.
You described the battle well and I'm curious, how it goes forth now. You should only be careful not too fast to pull out all the stops, you should let you space to improve the intensivity of the battles and the story and maybe check here and there for some little typos. But apart from that you did a very good job again.
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